Forgot to add the story to my fav's. And FF says I should write something here (so just see this as spam).

Wow.

This was a great story, really. I liked the end, even though it was sad. I even though I cried just a little, it left me quite overwhelmed. I like how you didn't write a feel-good ending, it suited the story best.

But there is ONE thing that has been bothering me the entire story (well, since chapter 7) and is now still doing so.

If Obi-Wan isn't a human, WHAT IS HE. WHY. HOW. EXPLAIN.

Or is it just that you forgot to do something with it/Decided it wasn't a good idea? (I can understand that, but I just NEED to know, I guess I got too absorbed in the story).

But I think I am going to read more of your stories. I really like your style.

Hey! I already talked to one of you in msn, but I also wanted to write a review here

I REALLY LOVE this fiction. I read it on another side...

anyway.. I love the way you show drama, life and love in this fiction. And anakins emotions. I really felt with him :)

By the way I really like the idea, that Anakin only imagine obi-wans presence in his prision in the end :)

greetings

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Brera

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Oh, God...how morbid. I wasn't expecting that at all. I feel like someone just kicked a puppy dog in front of me.
But, I enjoyed this. Just, the ending...gods...

Anakin seemed clamer,that's good. And he admitted a crush on Obi...how straightforward he was!

Luke were so cute and blushing Anakin must be adorable.Gyah!

That was . . . too sad. It was brilliant, and beautiful, and I loved reading it, but the last chapter and epilogue were just too sad. There was no happiness in the end, no peaceful release before it became too painful. Just . . . twenty years of suffering and grief. I loved the story, partly because Anakin gained redemption, and loved once again, but I can't reconcile myslef to the end. It was so *sad*. Too sad. I mean, it actually *hurt* to read it, to read of Anakin and Obi-Wan's fates. Still, it was excellently written, but the end was just too painful and raw to be beautifully moving. Other than that, I truly loved it. Unfortunatley I can deal with huge amounts of angst and pain and grief, so long as there is a happy, semi-happy, or at least a peaceful, relatively painless end. This made me cry. A lot. But you're still going in my fave authors list.

hi I love this story!

GAH! Damn good story. THE ENDING NEARLY KILLED ME!GAH HOW COULD YOU!EVIL!GAH!(sob...whine complane) okay im done now. DAMN good story! loved it butdont even get me started on the end.

I loved this story, it was so sad. I nearly cried at the end!

ARG

Fuck you! I loved this story, but the end is so sad.

But then )muahahahah) I liked it. A very original idea. It's so depressing, my sould ached with them. And it was so unexpected, too.

I only did such an ending once, coz I was to lazy to continue :-)

anyway, great story... lCiel

I love it all

everything is great!

I love your fic

great chapter