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| Tracie 2008-07-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseaww it shows the soft side of X-Ray. thats really sweet. :) |
| Dandelion Cat 2008-03-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw! That was so sweet! I really like how you picked a character that not everybody notices! Hey, one thing, you forgot to add an official disclaimer. I, as is typical for me, don't care but you don't want to mess with someone who does! Otherwise I think it is perfect! |
| SilverRain1.3 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abuseThis was beautiful. Its good to see X like that! |
| *doubleheart* 2006-02-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw *sniffle* That was so sweet! I adore your idea! Please don't stop your lovely writing... and thank you! :) |
| dorfinmat47 2005-12-24 ch 1, | abuseAw, that's so sad! I really like it! I haven't read any other Holes fanfics, but I think it's a good take on the story! |
| Lauraisace 2005-09-13 ch 1, | abuseHey just wanted to say that is so sweet i dont no why but for sum reson x ray is one of my favourite guys at cgl so thank god sum1 did a ff about him lol really cute ff can u write sum more? |
| silverpheonix2 2005-07-09 ch 1, | abuseOh! That's so sad...um, could you take a look at the Holes story posted on my account? I put it up for one of my friends and it's her very first fanfiction. She's thirteen and well, you may know how that is. I am not just reviewing to advertise though. I loved your story. It's really cute and sweet, and realistic. It's also not cliched or anything. ^-^! --Silver |
| McFlyIsLove-x 2005-07-02 ch 1, | abuseOh bless. I never really liked Xray though.He seemed too hard lol!Not as in tough... |
| black.nightfall 2005-06-30 ch 1, | abuseFor a few sentences, I was gunna cry xP. I'm not totally sure I get your symbolism...but...that could be just me. Keep going |
| Heather.b. 2005-06-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey! This story is really sweet! I'm sorry, but I don't get the symbolism you were talking about. Well... it was really sweet! *Hb* |
| abercrombie-is-life 2005-06-28 ch 1, | abuseaw thats so sweet and so sad |