Very insightful. U did a nice job writing this.

Intense. It makes you really feel the pain that she's going through and in a way, it makes you understand Lan too :)

poor nynaeve

As always, Lan and Nynaeve make a brilliant fanfic :) I agree with Nynaeve, breaking Lans calm is alwas a bonus! :) Well done:)

Very nice.

That's so sad! Stupid Lan! This story was very well-written. Good job!

A bit fast but good over all. It does make you wonder though how Lan got back into Nynaeve's affections when she was with him in Flame.

Aww... how sad. I like it though, a lot. And I agree with you about Egwene... she's not to be liked! Congratulations on producing another great piece!

so sweet!

however:

FavoUr (spelling corrections in cpatials)

i think thats it at the moment. can i steal it and keep it and read it again and again and again and again? (i like it a lot)

*grins*

Seems you like the LanxNynaeve pairing, EvilChani, by all the fanfiction you write about them. I like their pairing too, and the way you portray both is excellent. Neither is out of character which I find extremely rare in a fanfiction. I've only just begun to read the Shadow Rising, so I don't know much about what happens to them in the future, but I do know they marry, despite Lan's misgivings about making Nynaeve a widow very quickly. Well, I enjoyed it a lot, and I hope to see a lot more of your writing in the future!

-Saya1450-

This was absolutely amazing, toward the end you almost had me in tears, the way you depicted Nynaeve's sorrow was so heartfelt & lovely. Her anger & hurt mixed together were great & you really showed that under her tough leather skin & hard appearence/attitude towards life itself etc this was how she felt about loving Lan. This is definetely going on my Favourites List.

Great job EvilChani, I gotta' say you've got a real knack for writing Lan/Nynaeve fanfics & damn you do it well! :D

Banshee Queen.

okie dokie. Nynaeve is exaclty right. Why can't he just make up his mind for pity's sake!

That was really sad T.T but very good, great job on this

This is really good; I was re-reading this scene recently and wondered what it would be like. (Ugh, Lan needs to TALK more, doesn't he?) great job!

This is almost exactly like I pictured this scene going. I love it.