Reviews for When They Stopped Pretending

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Aries of F.I.R.E 2008-06-21 ch 2,	abuseHOLY SNAP! OF ALL THE HEIJI/KAZUHA DETECTIVE CONAN FANFICS I HAVE EVER READ... THIS WAS THE BEST ONE! i love the way u place this story in detail, as well as romance with a mix of suspence and such. i love it! i am totally faving this! ^^
love it 2008-06-13 ch 2, anon.	abusethis is so good... 10Q 4 writing it
Ayumi Uchiha 2007-08-09 ch 2,	abuseOh gawd. I loved it. ^,^ I have to agree with you on that one: laziness really is THE worst enemies of writers! Ahohoho. Mwah. ^,^
kenkao7rocks5forever 2007-04-10 ch 2,	abusethat was one of the CUTEST (!) heiji-kazuha fic i've ever read! it was so... so like them! the attitude, the words,, haha, i love this fic!
Lila Paige Rose 2007-04-05 ch 2,	abusei super duper love your HK ficcies!! Please write a lot more - more power! AJA! Btw, ur the best in diverse fis, didnt you know! Hell, your fics rate so high! O.o
keikeiaznqueen 2007-01-23 ch 2,	abuseOh, this is the best Heiji/Kazuha goodness I've ever read. XD There are little mistakes here and there but the fluff just sorta kills them off, every single blush the characters have just sorta sends flying to the moon for real!! XD I love the humour you add into this fic, it fits really well. And gawwd, those 2 are really idiots, aren't they? I feel so happy for Shinichi and Ran as well. XD I'd love to see more of Kaito and Aoko!! Good job!
keikeiaznqueen 2007-01-23 ch 1,	abuseAw, this is so awesome. The humour in this fic is unbeatable. XDD I love Kaito's remark on incest, and then the use of the word fishy and the comment where Kaito looked like a fish. XD Hahaha, all right, lovely chapter there, must read the next one! Instant fav, btw. ^0^
psychedelic aya 2006-11-04 ch 2,	abuseI must say, I ALWAYS love reading your fics. :D Always. I don't know--its just got that nice and light factor to it that makes it such a fun read. Tee hee. I started reading your SasuSaku fics a longlonglong time ago, and when I got to the DC fandom I was glad to find you here again. With your more-than-exceptional fics. XDXDXD Everything was just so FUNNY. Like wow. You blended all the characters SO well, and made them just how they were supposed to be (especially in a crack situation. Together.) And though this fic was full of good HeijixKazuha love, the presence of the other couples make me giggle and land in a pile of fluff. Which is a good thing. :D All in all, a really good fic (and I do hope you write more). Nishishishi.
nOOdles 2006-07-12 ch 2, anon.	abuseSeriously, I love this pairing because of you. You are a true converter. :)
AinoMinako 2006-06-30 ch 2,	abuseWhoa, this is a giant of a two-shot. It's amazing though. I have a really stupid grin on my face, and I just thought I'd let you know that. So cute! Talk about upstaging the bride, though. One thing bothered me... I think you mentioned Heiji and Kazuha having classes and I'm assuming they're still in high school. Which would mean that Ran and Shinichi were still in high school and getting married. Which seems kind of young. It's not that big of a deal though. Keep up the good work!
quevillion 2006-02-15 ch 2,	abuseGreat story! I must tell you, I laughed right out loud so many times during your story; just imagining the bewildered/shocked/uncomfortable/cheeky (and so much more) various expressions that your characters' faces don.. ahh it's too much. I greatly admire your patience, persistance, and perserverance in writing this hugely long (but extremely entertaining) story. Heiji and Kazuha's characters were fairly well-developed, as was the plot. You put in a lot of suspense - I find suspense is a quality many stories lack, it is just one event after another, bam bam bam, no mood, no description, etc. (Hopefully I don't become a hypocrite when I do try to write stories myself. =S) The only thing bugging me is that Heiji and Kazuha's relationship is focused mainly on them exchanging verbal blows and how the other is an "ahou". I think it'd be better with emotion-tweaking thoughts. Like during the wedding. That was awesome.
silentstarlight 2006-02-12 ch 2,	abuseI've re-read this story so many times, I lost count. About random note 4 at the end of this chapter, the word 'bi' is rain in Korean. I think most people usually refer to him as Bi though, I'm not quite sure.
dreamar 2006-01-01 ch 2,	abusei think that you should've added something about christmas time
CherryArrow 2005-11-22 ch 2,	abusegood job!
Kisa Yamashita 2005-09-24 ch 2,	abuseVery cool fanfiction! I love it!! It's so sweet and good-writing!XD

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