|Reviews for When They Stopped Pretending|
| Guest 11/17/12 . chapter 2
Omigod. This was... the LONGEST... twoshot I've ever read. My eyyyeees.
The best one I've ever read, too. x3 All my favorite pairings, along with some good ol' Heiji tormenting. Lot's of humor, fluff, and of course Heiji totally screws up his confession... but it worked. xD
| heartmira 7/26/12 . chapter 2
THE BEST DETECTIVE CONAN EVER.
I definitely cracked up multiple times throughout the story. I have to say, props for keeping them completely in characters, from Shinichi's "oi oi" to Kuroba's teasing to Heiji's last outburst (brilliant). Great job!
| Rei Sabere 4/20/12 . chapter 2
Okay. This is definitely my favorite work of yours. Very long fic, but worth it. This may even be my favorite HK fic. 3 You have a way with words, my friend. I felt that I was totally there. A spectator watching each move of the characters. I could hear the quarrels and antics of Heiji and Kazuha clearly. With their very supportive friends. :)
Also, it makes me reflect much on my life. :)) I would wait as long as Kazuha to find a guy like Heiji! Haha. Although at some point I could relate! HAHAHAHA. :"
Anyway, thank you so much for writing this fic. This definitely made my day. :) I hope to read more from you. :D Great job! Keep it up! :)
| MistyDelusions 9/28/11 . chapter 1
This is..like the perfect year-round gift for any KazuHeiji fan. I enjoyed your work so much that I couldn't help imagining all of this really happening in the manga/anime. I love how you captured Kazuha and Heiji's personalities and how the series of events took place. Splendid chapter. Makes me already love the finale even though I haven't read it yet. You are a fantastic writer, I can tell you that.
| My Bittersweet Ending 8/5/10 . chapter 2
woahh , this was one HELL of a fanfic ; it was so long it took me yoooonks to read . so ii'd figure ii'd leave uu a long (ish?) reveiw .
this fic was absolutely fantastic and wonderful(;
all of their personalities were spot-on, and hilarious (; ii laughed so hard that i started choking !
[ thanks to that , my MUM came in my room and looked at me funny ]
the plot was also really good, and super entertaining !
in short, it was awesomeawesomeawesome and uuhr an awesomeawesomeawesome writer !
ii hope uu keep writing more awesomeawesomeawesome stories !
| nobody 5/3/09 . chapter 2
I really enjoyed the story, very cute, very sweet and really quite frustrating...I'm sort of in the same boat, but I honestly don't know unlike Heiji...but anyhow, good story and maybe I'll figure my own stuff out soon as well.
| Krissel Himura 1/9/09 . chapter 1
woah! that was so long to read! hahaha! but it was nice but too detailed.. i dont know.. but still nice! _ hahaha! i'll read the next chapter next time! yeah! Kazuhaxheiji!
| Gabby-Chwan 6/21/08 . chapter 2
HOLY SNAP! OF ALL THE HEIJI/KAZUHA DETECTIVE CONAN FANFICS I HAVE EVER READ... THIS WAS THE BEST ONE!
i love the way u place this story in detail, as well as romance with a mix of suspence and such.
i love it! i am totally faving this!
| love it 6/13/08 . chapter 2
this is so good... 10Q 4 writing it
| Ayumi Uchiha 8/9/07 . chapter 2
I loved it. ,
I have to agree with you on that one: laziness really is THE worst enemies of writers!
| kenkao7rocks5forever 4/10/07 . chapter 2
that was one of the CUTEST (!) heiji-kazuha fic i've ever read! it was so... so like them! the attitude, the words,, haha, i love this fic!
| Lila Paige Rose 4/5/07 . chapter 2
i super duper love your HK ficcies! Please write a lot more - more power!
Btw, ur the best in diverse fis, didnt you know! Hell, your fics rate so high! O.o
| keiiah 1/23/07 . chapter 2
Oh, this is the best Heiji/Kazuha goodness I've ever read. XD There are little mistakes here and there but the fluff just sorta kills them off, every single blush the characters have just sorta sends flying to the moon for real! XD I love the humour you add into this fic, it fits really well. And gawwd, those 2 are really idiots, aren't they?
I feel so happy for Shinichi and Ran as well. XD I'd love to see more of Kaito and Aoko!
| keiiah 1/23/07 . chapter 1
Aw, this is so awesome. The humour in this fic is unbeatable. XDD I love Kaito's remark on incest, and then the use of the word fishy and the comment where Kaito looked like a fish. XD Hahaha, all right, lovely chapter there, must read the next one! Instant fav, btw. 0
| psychedelic aya 11/4/06 . chapter 2
I must say, I ALWAYS love reading your fics. :D Always. I don't know-its just got that nice and light factor to it that makes it such a fun read. Tee hee. I started reading your SasuSaku fics a longlonglong time ago, and when I got to the DC fandom I was glad to find you here again. With your more-than-exceptional fics.
Everything was just so FUNNY. Like wow. You blended all the characters SO well, and made them just how they were supposed to be (especially in a crack situation. Together.) And though this fic was full of good HeijixKazuha love, the presence of the other couples make me giggle and land in a pile of fluff.
Which is a good thing.
All in all, a really good fic (and I do hope you write more). Nishishishi.