what happens!? what happens!? you have such an interesting story and you just leave it here! No!

Okay, I'm actually gonna beg...

THIS IS THE BEST KYOxYUKI STORY IVE EVER READ! PLEASE UPDATE, YOU'VE JUST GOT TO! IVE NEVER READ SOMETHING SO GREAT! THE PLOT IS AMAZING AND THE CHARACTER DEVELOPEMENT IS GREAT! YOUVE DONE SUCH A WONDERFUL JOB, PLEASE CONTINUE! ILL CRY IF YOU DONT!

Wow. And to think that I hated KyoxYuki until right now...

I truly hope that you haven't put this story on hold. It is a mural of words, a true work of art. I'm dying to learn more about Yuki's circumstances, and I'm sure Kyo has a lot to say.

I'm sure people have been hounding you for over a year now, but please update? Something this good should be cherished, and an update...well, it would preserve and spread this masterful fic to all the other Fruits Basket fans.

This story is GREAT. It's just amazing, nobody but you and the author of "Not Gonna Get Us" have written KyoxYuki the way I prefer--and find it at it's best!
But that author has obviously abandoned that wonderful story just when things heated up-please! Yo haven't done the same have you!? Over TWO years of not updating--please!! You MUST continue! Gosh, this is JUST how I like to read KyoxYuki, with a sudden but soft plotline. An amazing change that compels Kyo to learn about Yuki, to treasure his presence! You show that life still continues around them, just as the author of that other story did--you two do it perfectly! You don't force the plot and the subtleness and the changes, you just let them flow, slowly taking off! I LOVE the way you show Kyo and Yuki's little convos, such trivial things...what movies were good, which books were better... Things friends would converse about... And I still wanna know what fate Yuki REALLY did save Kyo from, why he cares so much--AUGH! I could go on, but usually my long reviews get cut off!

I actaully like this. You give Kyo a distinctive character without making him the total ass he's usually painted as, which is nice. Also, the stirrings of plot. Still, it reads a little dry. Remember that emotion comes from the words, use nouns and verbs that reflect the feeling you are trying to create. People being somber doesn't make most readers sad, you have to go a step further.

s-s-so-so SAD! Herry up and make it happy before I cry...jk lol

if you dont hurry up and update

i'll never ever read any of your stories again!

if you dont update, i'll track you down and tickle you to insanity until you update.

i know being insane and updating at the same time is difficult,

but i like torturing people, so i'll set aside plenty off time to make it happen

one of the (few) good kyoxyuki fics out there. i'm really enjoying this fic. will you update, though?

You must...write...more...hurry...
~Thura Huodae

This story is very interesting and I ho[e that you will update as soon as possible.

This inspires me. A lot. It's good to see some good Yuki/Kyo fic. I'm very much enjoying this story, and I hope you'll continue it. It's too good a story to abandon forever. ^_^

this is great update soon please *smile* ja ne

AH CONTINUE CONTINUE.

I love it.

A lot.

A lot.



...andIhavetoknowwhathappens.

Wow you haven'[t updated in so long! You must continue! Please? Hoping for another chapter soon!

~BB~

Oh please update soon. This story is amazing. It's too sad at this point. If you are a good and just writing god, you will give us the happy ending that we deserve!!