Love it so far! However, I really think you should do some stories about the incident in Padme's office; and stories about the 'aggressive negotiations' on the veranda, the Anakin projecting naughty images into Padme's mind when she's giving speeches, and Anakin undressing Padme with the Force again incidents! Would love to see stories about these incidents (especially the 'aggressive negotiation' on the veranda-LOL!)! I'm trying to imagine Anakin trying to get Padme to have sex on their veranda-HAHAHA! Love their banter! So cute!

The end of this chapter makes me cry / It reminds me of me and my husband, he lives abroad for now while he works to get his visa, and while it is hard, the wait will be worth it, just like you portray in this story. You are an amazing writer and I love to read your stories over and over again.

Fiona x

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dear shawn,

i absolutely adore your stories. you actually make anakin & padme into flesh n blood for me. so may i have the NC-17 version of this chapter, pls. or do you have other version for most of your stories? i would love to have them...

many thanks in advance.

OMG this was such a wonderfully written story. Fantastic job, really.

I would love to read the NC-17 chapter, could you link me to the group please

Why don't you just post the NC-17 versions of your stories of so that people don't have to request them or sign up on yahoo to read them? That is just my suggestion, if ou do post them of please tell me so I can read them.

Awesome chapter keep up the goos work and update soon!

Awesome chapter keep up the goos work and update soon!

Awesome chapter keep up the goos work and update soon!

Awesome chapter keep up the goos work and update soon!

Aggressive negotiations I love it!

Thia story is amazing! I adore it, it's so full of life and love and tragedy and adventure and passion - I just can't get enough! I can't wait for part three in this series, please tell me Anakin is not actually dead, but just missing in action!

My sincerest thanks for such a wonderful story and congratulations on composing such an admirable piece of writing

How cute! Padme is a randy one, isn't she? ;) While Anakin is just... Anakin. :D (But he is kinda randy also).

love story

hey i am red lighting from

and i have stars wars story idea and i'm looking for a writer

here the idea

padme and Anakin have met 10 years ago like in the movie but have not seen each other since

anakin is a jedi and padme a sentor but jedi are allowed to have families padme has one year daughter almost two just a daughter and the father is not involed anakin is single

here a good idea of heow they first meet padme daughter gwts lost at a party and who finds her and mother so they run into

let me know what you think

red lighting