Amazing, amazing story. (I joined your group so I could read the unedited version, but I decided to review the story here since this is where I discovered it.) Your understanding of Anakin and Padmé is phenomenal. You are one of the few authors who writes them flawlessly. You just "get" them. That alone made this story incredibly enjoyable to read. Keep your masterpieces coming!

Oh wow - such an amazing finale to this chapter. That discussion between Obi-Wan and Anakin made me chuckle, I love the suspicions that exist but the decision not to pry - it seems very realistic somehow. Their lvoe scene was amazing and completely unique - I don't think I've ever read anyhting like it - and it definitely got very hot in here!

Well done - I always get really excited when I see you've written something new! And you certainly lit up my day!

I've watched this story unfold for a very long time and I must say you rival any 'formal' author there is. Such a romantic, yet action ridden tale, I find myself longing for Chapter 3. Thank you soo much for enlighting my day. Please offer the next tale as soon as all possible.

Mo

That was really exciting! I hope you will update soon.

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Hi, great story! Can I get the other version of this capter please.

I love your story so far. By that I mean I can't wait another month or so it might take you to update again. So please find it in your heart to write as quickly as your fingers allow and post the next chapter as soon as humanly, or otherwise, possible...

Mo

OMG THIS IS AWESOME I LOVE IT. CAN I THE OTHER VERSION OF CHPT 2. THX

Very, very exciting. :)

Oh, I thought this was just a one chapter fic! I'm so glad it's not - you have a way of capturing their dialogue that is almost impossible - the way they relate to each other, the actual words they speak, it's so terribly realistic. It's almost enchanting, because the innocence of their love is still there while acknowledging that their relationship exists on a deeper level as well. It's just beautiful.

I hope there's more.

Can I have the extended version? Pretty please?

I think you know what I'm going to ask for- my email is

So I read up until the edited scenes and I'm not going to read beyond that, because I'd rather read the full version. However, I can comment on what I've read so far. I thought the opening passage worked well. Introducing the outsiders perspective was done very nicely and tied in to the A/P plot neatly. I also liked the light comic relief in Anakin's and Obi-Wan's conversation.

I'm so glad you updated this- I've been waiting for ages!

Thanks,

eridani

Great up-date. The interaction between the two of them is so very romantic. Do continue! You say there is a NC-17 version of a certain chapter. Please tell me how I can get access to this "ahem" version.

Wow what an amazing, incredible emotionally and well written chapter. You are an awsome and extremely talented write. More please.

Please, please, please write more. Your story is awsome.

THAT was a totally cruel cliffhanger! NOW u have no choice to write more. Well u do, but i jus want u to know i really really really really really really really really really wanna know what happens next(thats what cliffhangers r for right :)). Anyway, update soon cant wait to find out what happens next!