 Sabeke 2008-10-08 . chapter 1o that's so sweet ^^ |
 Kaoro Tsumi 2008-09-01 . chapter 1Really neat, I like it a lot. How the harmless game of flirting leads to more ^^ |
 dolphin <3's scarecrow 2006-11-26 . chapter 1 *giggles*
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i love it! |
 RandomTopic 2006-07-23 . chapter 1Hm. Not bad. |
 tsukiraven 2005-12-12 . chapter 1Great one! cute, a little fluffy, and i like it! |
 yaoi-is-wowie21 2005-11-12 . chapter 1Cute! Beautifully done. ^^ Iruka and Kakashi are just too wonderful. I love how he calls it a game. Lovely. |
 Turin 2005-07-26 . chapter 1 LOL... Iruka finally got one over Kakashi. n_n did Kakashi think that he could outfox a kindergarten teacher? |
 Cassie Yo. 2005-06-29 . chapter 1 MWAHAHA! I smell seme-Iruka! Just kidding >.>! Very cute... it made me smile e.e! I love all your stories. |
 Pout 2005-06-28 . chapter 1That was really sweet! KakaIru makes me happy. I particularly liked the last line. Everyone's a winner. :) |
 Monna Sakura 2005-06-28 . chapter 1Hahahaha! Kyute! Wasn't quite expecting that! *snicker* Go, 'Ruka-sensei! |
 ruka-kun 2005-06-28 . chapter 1aw his was so cute. A little short though, but still fun! |
 Baka-Sensei 2005-06-27 . chapter 1AW! CUTE! I love it. Very sweet. Great job! |
 Ota4 2005-06-27 . chapter 1I like it~
KakaIru rocks~
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Keep writing! |
 Ota 2005-06-27 . chapter 1 I like where this story is heading. I'm glad it has paragraphs unlike others I've read before. >.> Besides any grammatical errors or typos that other people have mentioned, your story is good and I would like you to continue.
Your writing will improve in time if you keep going. Don't let us stop you. ^_^ |
 Nezuko 2005-06-27 . chapter 1Very nice. Clean and breathless. This ever-so-short format suits the story well. A passing moment. And your leaving the participants open to the imagination works. |