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Sabeke
2008-10-08 . chapter 1
o that's so sweet ^^
Kaoro Tsumi
2008-09-01 . chapter 1
Really neat, I like it a lot. How the harmless game of flirting leads to more ^^
dolphin <3's scarecrow
2006-11-26 . chapter 1
*giggles*

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i love it!
RandomTopic
2006-07-23 . chapter 1
Hm. Not bad.
tsukiraven
2005-12-12 . chapter 1
Great one! cute, a little fluffy, and i like it!
yaoi-is-wowie21
2005-11-12 . chapter 1
Cute! Beautifully done. ^^ Iruka and Kakashi are just too wonderful. I love how he calls it a game. Lovely.
Turin
2005-07-26 . chapter 1
LOL... Iruka finally got one over Kakashi. n_n did Kakashi think that he could outfox a kindergarten teacher?
Cassie Yo.
2005-06-29 . chapter 1
MWAHAHA! I smell seme-Iruka! Just kidding >.>! Very cute... it made me smile e.e! I love all your stories.
Pout
2005-06-28 . chapter 1
That was really sweet! KakaIru makes me happy. I particularly liked the last line. Everyone's a winner. :)
Monna Sakura
2005-06-28 . chapter 1
Hahahaha! Kyute! Wasn't quite expecting that! *snicker* Go, 'Ruka-sensei!
ruka-kun
2005-06-28 . chapter 1
aw his was so cute. A little short though, but still fun!
Baka-Sensei
2005-06-27 . chapter 1
AW! CUTE! I love it. Very sweet. Great job!
Ota4
2005-06-27 . chapter 1
I like it~
KakaIru rocks~
^^
Keep writing!
Ota
2005-06-27 . chapter 1
I like where this story is heading. I'm glad it has paragraphs unlike others I've read before. >.> Besides any grammatical errors or typos that other people have mentioned, your story is good and I would like you to continue.
Your writing will improve in time if you keep going. Don't let us stop you. ^_^
Nezuko
2005-06-27 . chapter 1
Very nice. Clean and breathless. This ever-so-short format suits the story well. A passing moment. And your leaving the participants open to the imagination works.
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