I would love to beta any naruto stories just contact me

all that was just incredibly insane... you'd think that Naruto and Kyuubi would've forewarned Haku, Miko, Anko and Kurenai and made plans to keep them safe...at least Miko I'm pretty sure Naruto's father would've wanted that...but i guess all good things must come to an end. lol very random and crazy story.

Wow.

Hands down the most rushed story I've ever seen. Utterly unsatisfying to read.

Worse of all this story might of even had potential if you'd done it properly... as is it reads like one giant, rambling stream of consciousness.

HOLY FUCKING SHIT! whoh for the end... -_- XD

use all of them in the pairrings

Sucky. That's the only word i can think of? Yup... The whole fic is totally unrealistic. Why would naruto's mom purposely say she is Naruto's mom to iruka and even tell him she was resurrected? Besides, the ability to resurrect... unrealistic? YUP! the grammar is bad, spelling is wrong i don't even understand half of the story, so i have had enough of it, and i will stop reading this. Too bad? Yup...

nice i like it

Oine moment he had been kissed byb the woman and now he was awake.

a few metres away from him on the ground/.

What really managed to ,make himn gasp was the

These are some of the mistakes.

man, you had a REALLY good story going, but i felt that you screwed it up on the 2nd exam day

awsome story so far and i know it may be way late to even bother with this but i say naruto should be with kyuubi ^^ seeing as how kyuubi is female in this story lol, well anyways keep up with the great work brah

nice story so far, very intersting, looking forward to reading the rest of it, keep up the great work

It was good at first but got really F'ed up around the end.

Great chapter and story so fair pleaces continue the story soon.

I realized that you have quite a number of spelling errors, it is most probably due to fast typing speed is it?

anko