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Eka1
2009-12-17 . chapter 1
Maybe a holiday update for all of your loving fans?
Kanela
2009-12-14 . chapter 62
What.A.Story.

Last week I started reading Manifestations because an authoress of the 4xD fandom recommended this sequel...so I felt like I needed to read them in order and yeah, you get it.

And, OMG!! this story is so great, so well written, fulfilling, it is wonderful!! I'm loving it!

As of now, you've gotten yourself a new fan :D

So, I'm off to read Realizations, hohohoho XD
Happy holidays! And congratulations for your baby!
The Orange Girl
2009-11-11 . chapter 62
Admittedly, I've been trying to skip 'Revelations' since the first time I've seen this some years ago because I had been daunted by the increasing number of chapters and word count. ^^;

But I think it was all worth it -- trying to put it off, in a sense, because the moment I started reading it, I knew I couldn't let it go. This had been, literally, one of the things that had been keeping me awake for the past three days because I simply couldn't part from it. I had to know what would happen next. XD

Though the errors had been mostly sporadic, interspersed and far in between have not exactly been a turn-off to the readers, I've got to say that there's that English grammar Nazi bit in me that still found it a little difficult to let some mistakes pass. My dear, 'blond' is used to refer to men, and 'blonde' for women. As well, there were a few words that you've continuously interchanged ("Quatre couldn't 'bare' to see her...", as opposed to the correct form: "Quatre couldn't 'bear' to see her..."; other I don't exactly remember but am quite sure are existent in the higher chapters), but perhaps it's the homophone-ic factor that brings about such mistakes. There are more, but I shall not be too nitpicky about it -- I still stand by my opinion that these mistakes, however glaringly obvious to my critical eye (not that I'm a perfect being incapable of error, mind you!), have not stopped me from falling in love with your story... and the lovely idea of 4xD ending up together. :D :D :D

This, perhaps, is the best exploration of Quatre and Dorothy post-GW. I doubt any of the flowery words I could say right now would matter; every faithful reviewer of your story must have already lauded you because you've accomplished a milestone for this (small) fandom.

And lastly, congrats on your new family! :) I hope this inspires you, and drives you into doing the most creative and productive things in life.

Nudge nudge, I am rooting for you to update soon as well! ♥
Ryan
2009-10-20 . chapter 1
Poor Dorothy. It was Chinese, but I made the same mistake once so I know just what she was going through.

Seeing as this is quite some time after you wrote this that I found it, I of course started with Manifestations and then went through Realizations before starting this one. As such, I missed out on a few things, but nothing too major I believe as I head into this tale here.
Bruteaous
2009-10-09 . chapter 62
Hey, sorry it has taken me so long to review this chapter, but I knew I had to read it a couple times before I could finally get a feel for it and I have to say that I really liked it (no big surprise there). I like how Dorothy is starting to relinquish some of her pride and hesitation and fall into step with Quatre and his emotions (at least partially- it's a start ;)). And I was literally so excited to find out that you had updated, that I had to do a double take on my email before I was sure that it indeed did say that there was a chapter 62 up. YAY~! :) On so many levels, YAY! :D

Good work, enjoyable and classic as always.

Have a great weekend!

-Bruteaous-
Divinitas Intereo
2009-10-01 . chapter 62
Finally, I've been waiting for this story to be updated for so long. When I read this latest chapter I had to go back two before in order for the whole story to come back and get me. I have to say that this was very enjoyable and that I had an good time reading it. Hopefully you update faster.

By the way, congrats on the kid.
The Legendary Kanin
2009-09-20 . chapter 62
Please tell me you're still alive! And your kid too!

Will wait patiently.
Icy Discordia
2009-09-17 . chapter 62
Wow... wonderful as usual. Thank you!
i'm a quitter
2009-09-16 . chapter 62
Wow. I feel like I'm reading a novel I could actually buy at a bookstore! You got Dorothy and Quatre down perfect!
Franny Glass
2009-09-08 . chapter 62
This was perfectly fabulous, absolutely marvelous, beyond brilliant, effectively heartbreaking, positively breathtaking. You are the best-the best-GW author. Period. I have been reading GW fanfiction since 20, and nothing I have encountered tops your work. Nothing. You understand these character in a deep, intelligent, loving, honest, and, most rarely, human way. I admire you tremendously. Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!

(And, congratulations on your baby!)
Bunny Sailor Moon
2009-09-02 . chapter 62
So awesome to see an update. :) This was great. ^_^
blissful trinity
2009-08-26 . chapter 62
I'm so happy that you updated! You have an amazing capacity to write! This chapter was awesome! I love the development between the 2 and its so deep too. Although I was hoping for a lil sweet intimate moment other than the blazing of emotions at the end... I'm still so excited to read your one!! And congratulations on the baby =D
fineaffle
2009-08-24 . chapter 62
I was wondering if you were still continuing this story. I absolutely love it. This is story is just epic, and the way it was written is just top notch. I'd tell you to update more often but I know genius cant be rushed. So take your time. :)
Fan!
2009-08-18 . chapter 62
Oh my god, that's so good! This for me is the best chapter yet! I hope you keep going. and congratulations to the new member of your family!
tune143
2009-08-18 . chapter 62
OMG! Thank you so much for the new chapter.

And congratulations to your family! :D Hoping your baby's fine and healthy. :D
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