Muy bueno! I really enjoy this story and it was really nice!

I think this tenchi muyo fanfic has the best ending and plot and it's my all time fave because you put three things that i **LOVE**

1. Relationship between Ryoko and Tenchi or someone else with Ryoko rather than Tenchi.

2. Friendship between Ayeka and Ryoko even though Tenchi picked one of them and no one left.

3. Mother and daughter thing, Ryoko's relationship with her *mom*

keep writing fanfics like this one I'd even like it if Ryoko was with someone like Yosho,hotsuma etc that would've been kewl too.

THIS IS MY FAVE ALL TIME FANFIC EVER

Ryoko Fan Forever

I LOVE IT! WRITE MORE!

excellent, as all your other work seems to be. I hope you haven't retired

Well, that was sweet. The dinner scene was well written, and the bit about Ryoko not being able to taste was sensible and thought-provoking. I hadn't thought of that possibility before. Keichi and Belldandy were nicely written. A little more exposition on what happened before Tenchi showed up at the Shrine might've been helpful because in the beginning it seems as if Belldandy and Keichi have already planned for this arrival. Still, this was a good read. Thank you for writing and posting it on the internet.

ya know, i've always wondered what a tenchi/oh my goddess crossover would be like, and i'm glad i found a good one! (where was skuld, though? ;_;) uh, anyway, great story!

Ooooh! I love Ryoko and Tenchi, but I also love Keiichi and Belldandy, too! You are soooo cool, and you write so well! Keep writing! YOU ROCK!

I love this story. Those two anime series seem to compliment each other so well. I just love it when Ryoko is portrayed as the loving mother to Mayuka. I just think it's cute. I hope you write more chapters or a sequel to this story. I enjoyed it very much.

I loved it! I can see that whether it's ryoko, Ayeka, or any of the others, a lot of thought goes into not just who Tenchi will end up with, but in how the story develops. I can see that you not only enjoy writing for Tenchi, but that we get that benefit too. PLEASE, keep writing more!

Thanks!

P.S.- Can you review my Fan-Fic so I can do the same!

(Freinds & Family)

Thanks again!

::claps hands:: Well done._ Lil' Mayuka thinks Ryoko is her mom...sniff. It was sweet, it was believable, it was short! 'Course, I'm still waiting for more Illusions...

I think this is very interesting. It has good characterization, and an interesting plot. Keep up the good work

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OOOO! I love the way you are exploring Ryoko's relationship with Washu! Such a touching scene! *SNIFF*

I can't wait to see more!

Di

Sounds pretty good! I like the interaction between Washu and Ryoko, though don't let it get too mushy (a lot of people have fallen into that trap). Keep it up, but don't forget aboot Illusions! ..

I like how you add Mayuka in your stories, makes me consider doing that myself. All in all a great chapter, was this taking place before or after the first chapter, also if Ryoko was hugging Washu, where did she set Mayuka down at? since it was a fierce hug and all, I would think that Mayuka could have been hurt by the force of the hug. A few parts in this story I felt needed a little more explaining (the part about her first night back in the house kind of threw me for a few seconds). None the less, I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter, and once agian. Thank you for making Mayuka a part of your stories. I always love seeing her with Ryoko it's very uplifting.

I am kind of confused, since I don't know that much about AH my Goddess mostly. But what I don't understand is: Was Ryoko in the city watching Tenchi, or was she back home at Tenchi's house watching him somehow through the lake, like a mystic would while looking in a crystal ball, or had she split in two, (as she did in The Night before the carnival,) and sent one form to see what Tenchi was doing. Or was it Bell who sensed Ryoko was thinking about him and told him to call out to her? that part didn't quite flow to me, but I am not the quickest rabbit in the field.