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| Windswift 2005-12-15 ch 1,  | abuse... just discovered that fanfiction has an anti-review-spamming-thing. Which says that when I decided I better go back and review your fics because I decided they deserved some reviews [and I've felt guilty because I don't review much as of late... but my reviews would be better used here for short entertaining fics with fewer reviews than the popular ones with tons of reviews], that I was reviewing too fast and it was not humanly possible to do so. But it must have been, because to the best of my knowledge, I am human... and none of this has anything to do with the story [though I promise I'll get to that in a moment], but hopefully it provides at least a little entertainment as you sit there, look at my ramblings, and go "what a dork..." Which is okay. I am a dork. But an amused dork. That does make good sense... without the suffering, how would the fun be so fun? ... You leave yesterday's incident to the imagination. And how we pity the woman... Yay, scones. And gangsters. But at the moment, mostly scones. ... Will the eating part traumatize Mrs. Lupin as much as the cooking part? I would hope they're capable of producing edible, albeit messy, foodstuffs. -Windswift |
| JetGriffins89 2005-10-17 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. It was very er... amusing. |
| melata 2005-07-01 ch 1, | abuseShort and sweet, but I think you got the group togetherness just right. And the last line is typical of the youngish marauders. |
| fledge 2005-06-29 ch 1, | abusePretty fic, though entirely plotless, of course. I think you have portrayed the characters rather well. Llandudno? So Remus lives in Wales, too, near to Godric's Hollow, perhaps? Good fun reading, too! |
| Folk 2005-06-28 ch 1, | abuse"He went downstairs, skipping over the step that had been creaky even before James had fallen off the railing onto it..." That's great! This is rather a short chapter, but I really like how you've made the narration match the general tone of the Marauders...please tell me this isn't a one-shot, it's too funny (and NOT in a forced, clichéd way) to stop! Wonderful, I enjoyed this greatly! ~Ivy~ |
| Solana13 2005-06-27 ch 1, | abuseOh so cute! I can so picture Sirius as a gangster! |
| liadyn fawks 2005-06-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseheheheh. heheh. I wanna see Peter drink some spiked punch. heheh. heheheheheh. |
| Nosilla 2005-06-27 ch 1, | abuseHahahahahaha... gansta... (pictures Sirius dressed as a ganster) tee hee hee... |
| Cesca Marie 2005-06-27 ch 1, | abuselol very funny. is this a one shot or are u continuing the story to include the party and Sirius getting wild? |