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| Lumina-16 2008-05-23 ch 1, | abuseThis was really cool. You really captured,like, everything. I loved the last two sentences, it was beautiful. |
| saidtheirnevers 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseOh my gosh. Oh, my gosh. Oh my GOSH. How many other ways are there to say that? I love stories written like this, the storyline and parentheses, and the way Sakura thinks of Sasuke, and how her dreams stable her reality, and how...just everything. Make this feeling go away, is what she's got to be saying. Make it all just disappear. But you realized that if Sakura does get over Sasuke, she will feel so empty inside (without her dreams, her hopes) that she will die of that. Oh my gosh. Oh. my. gosh. |
| Shazia 2006-01-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseyou know how to portray a severely love sick girl. Great details. |
| All's End 2006-01-23 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful |
| newbostongrl 2005-11-13 ch 1, | abuseno offense but ur story is a little wierd and confusing. but ur a good writer |
| Magical Poof 2005-11-09 ch 1, | abuseWow. This is amazing. You're a very talented writer, and I thoroughly enjoyed this fic. I love that you show how love is like a disease, and how Sasuke was actually the one dragging /her/ down. |
| shir0-chan 2005-07-06 ch 1, | abusethis is really good i love it...the way you described everything in this is very detail...it's like you completely know the character inside out...i love this alot...i'm looking forward to reading the sequel of this...keepu up the great work |
| Wicked Enough 2005-07-04 ch 1, | abuseWhen you can discribe feelings such as these, and you make the reader feel as if they are inside the mind of an anguished, lovesick girl, you know that you are a true writer. You, my friend, are a true writer. Without overplaying drama or angst for "good writing", you've managed to capture a few, torn thoughts with artistic flair. I especially like the fact that you didn't keep Sakura serious the whole time, because anyone who knows her personality knows she can't be angsty all the time. I enjoyed this one-shot very much, and I congradulate you on this masterpiece. Continue writing! Wicked |
| Aitashiaku 2005-07-01 ch 1, | abusevery well written..good descriptions! and its nice and angsty but not too much...i think that yous hould continue this ficcie, coz i'd like to read a nother chappie. ^^ Please update soon if you do! Great job on this one! |
| psychedelic_aya 2005-06-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw, poor Sakura. I just love the way she's so devoted... Excellent capture of her feelings, btw. XD Write more! |
| sakunade 2005-06-27 ch 1, | abuseWow. I found this to be very poetic. I hope this isn't a one-shot because I would love for you to continue. ^_^ I loved every part of this chapter. x3 And I bet there's only more to come! Continue! I'll be waiting. ^_^ |