love the story can't wait for an update!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!

no I so like this you cant do this to me gr

o i really like the story
i hope rory and tristan meet up soon and hopefully it will be a good reunion

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understandable update soon

good

I like this story alot please update soon. the mystery is tristan. is this going to be a troy.

i love this story
you are a great author

hope you continue

loved it update soon

I love this please update soon. I want to see them together and have him help her get her life back together again along with Paris. Both of them can remind her of who she once was.

Rory's talking really stiffly. maybe saying something like "I'll be done soon" instead of "I will be done soon" would make her seem less stiff.

wow, i'm intrigued. this has gotta be one of best of creative writing i've come across. so much talent, so much potential.

i hope to read more of this, so keep us readers updated with what happens next =)

keep up the phenomenal work tink ;)

I really love this story! I'm very curious about the events that will follow. Please update soon.

my God. you know how to write!! i read you story Purple Diamond in the Sky and i thought it was amazing. now i'm reading this, and i am dazzled!! you have a quality in your writing that just drags the reader in and they drown in your story. i'm glad you want to persue a career in writing because i want to read whatever you write! i want you to know that you can take as much time as you want to update to get it right. sooner is better, but i won't complain so long as you update. wow