I know it's been long since you wrote this, but good stories deserve to be read and worshiped. Beautyful(sp?) fic! Lucky me that I could still read it.

Amazing! I love it!

Very wonderfully written YNM fic. Probably one of the best I have ever read. I can honestly say it was very well written though it made my third person RP go first person coz I was reading this at the same time. Beautiful descritpions, wonderful depth of personality. I really loved it. Thank you for feeding my need for more YNM stuff. Luvs you now.

aw... that's soo sweet and touching... i like!

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this was such a nice story! poor tsuzuki. make him better!

That is so sweet. ^_^ I really like this fic. Great job!!

I have read quite a lot of YnM fics, but so far, this is one of the few that moved me with its quiet beauty. You used the simplest words to convey a deeper meaning, which often works best than going dramatic all the way.
Thank you for writing this.

Very well written. I usually don't like Hisoka-reminiscing-to-himself fics. But this one took my breath away. They were both very in character. Good job.

i read this one a while back on your site...didn't know you had it up here too or i would've commented a long time ago...i really love this fic!...^_^...

Gorgeous, wonderfully gorgeous plot and touchingly IC. Description could have been a little better but it was an enjoyable read.

I read this long ago already, but on another site I think. Now I have to write a review, because I like it so much and it was the firs YnM fic I ever read. Very touching. ^^

Wow. This was incredible! I'm new to this fandom but I've got to say that if the other fanfiction for it is half as good as this is, then I'm in for a lot of great reading! Thanks for posting this, it rocks!

I really like that! You didn't over dramatize Hisoka, but you made him real. It's really good.

I've been having a very strong bias for Tsuzuki/Hisoka fics lately--probably because I only just finished watching the Kyoto arc a couple of days ago. ^^;; This is a very, very nice dive into Hisoka's thoughts after that whole ordeal with Muraki, and I enjoyed it greatly. Very lovely fic you have written here. ~_^

Oh my...the last line is perfect. I also like the way Hisoka is characterized in this piece as I think it's dead on the money! ;-)