This was really beautiful!

*sniffles* That was so sweet... I love Tsuzuki and Hisoka fics! Honestly, that was so beautiful!

So waffy!I love it!I love the idea of Hisoka melting like an ice cube under Tsuzuki's influence!

really touching and beautiful story there *sniff* keep up the good work!

Beautiful story. As I mentioned in email, I not only like it so much that I wish I'd written it, it also matches so well with the way I see Hisoka that I almost could have written it... but it's ever so nice when I don't have to.

Eloquent... perfect. The theme is so touching and seems apropos to an underappreciated novel fan fiction. *cries* ;_; I love it

Sooo cute! I love Hisoka x Tsuzuki fanfics, and this one make me feel warm inside, keep the good job!

Too lazy to sign in... -.-;; Loved how you addressed Hisoka's changing personality. Its really hard to tell in the manga, but the way you had him narrate it made him much more believable and easier to understand. The direct narration was great... it protrayed Hisoka's almost blunt thoughts in a very straight forward way. It mirrored his character, how there are not many twist and turns in his personality, unlike Tsuzuki in some instances. The description of Tsuzuki through Hisoka was also interesting. You described their changing relationship very well. I'll be looking for more of your YnM fics!

Wow. That was lovely... I've only recently gotten into Yami no Matsuei, so I don't know much about the characters, but this has really helped me get into their minds, and I'm greatful for that no da. _

Oh, wow. I like this. It's sad, and beautiful, and I'm all wistful now. *smiles*