Okay I'm confused. Weren't June's friends transformed into Kaijex's?

Other then that while it would have been nice to go in dept on the human to Kaijex transformation the story over all is pretty creative.

Imagi

WOW. I am the 100th review! Execelent story, execelent ending... You're a pro! Can't wait to read Nazz'Tara of Kaijex I!


...WOW.

E! I saw that coming! E! BABEIS! Yes yes yes yes ! I saw that coming! Little alien babies!1 So cute! That was so adorable except... Double D is such a stiff. DUDE! And SO CUTE TOO! Such an adorable alien royal family! I can't wait! And TWINS! Man, if Double D fainted now, I just can imagine how many times he would of have to have been revived to consieve those darling bundels of joy. Man, Kevin and Rolf in this scene were great. Rolf won. :) I want to shreak in another girlly squeal. E! *gasp*

*giggle* This chapter was adorable and sweet. I thought it was so funny when Rolf poured dirt on them. I was just imagining alien Double D and Nazz all dress pretty and then PLOP dirt all over them. "hitchy hitchy" that was just great. Go on Nazz, tease Kevin. It's funny watching him (in my head of course) sputter in uncomfortability. Why is Jimmy too young to know of 'personal celebration'? How old is he now? Nearly twenty? Mid-teens? *giggle* Double D is going to be so twitchy, awkward, and uncomfortable. He'll probably faint. He fainted before his wedding. More *giggle* I remeber almost a year ago Double D proposed and I was really happy and smiling. I know it was almost a year ago because the next day at school I doodled a small picture of that scene on my Spanish worksheet I wasn't planning on turnning in and it was on learning how to pronounce the Spanish alphabet and that was the first thing we learned. And now, finnaly, the wedding has taken place. And I am so happy you are writting a Kaijax I. Smile. And it has alot to with Katarn. She is one of my favorite of the characters in your story and the favorite of those not from Peach Creek.

Not bad. I really love how you described everything, like the conflicts between humans and aliens.

If there's one thing I SERIOUSLY can't stand (among other things), it's racism, bigotry, and all that stuff. It makes me wanna beat 'em up, but I know that'll only make me as bad as they are. *SIGH*

Once again, great job dude.

Yah!! It's so cute! They are getting married! It was just such an adorable ending after much political stuffyness. But strangly I liked that political stuffyness. It was a debate that decided the whole of Earth's fate and really convayed the distress Earth was in. Before in earlier chapters humans were at least agressive, but now they are so beaten into submission that they were once as proud of creature as man. Except for that Indira, who seems to think she has the grounds to be able to argue with the other races with her planet's present state, but thank all kinds of heavenly beings that if she didn't her world mey have been successfully enslaved. This story is developing a closure, but there must be at least one last chapter, the WEDDING! Double D and Nazz are finally after so many years, so many battles, so many crazed fan ficers cheering you on, and so many awkward and/or romantic moments that I bet happened over those many years between books one and two they are finally going to marry! And before they date! Shockers! Very nice plot!

Thank God. Finally, a story where SOMEONE manages to convince the aliens that bigotry and blood isn't limited to the human race. I love the plan for rebuilding, too... That's the thing that the invasion stories, no matter how well written, always leave out. Except for Battlefield Earth. The terms of the original agreement remind me of 2 things: The Treaty of Versailles, and the terms of the protection treaty in Stargate SG-1

You updated! When I saw you did I was so suprised and happy! THis story has got to be one of my favorites! So everyine is back to well not normal, but the war is over. A Kaijax I prohaps because this certainly doesn't sound like a proper ending to it all since the whole Oracle thing in the begining. What of the Zardazians that were on the ship that Nazz and co overthrough? Where did they go?

OH NO, MAN! PLEASE, NOK I! How about, you have June's grandmother go on a quest to reverse all the devastation, and give warning in the past, or, you could just let them be in peach creek and have zany adventures like always- until they unlock an alien database or something that they use to build a fleet of Kaijex. But please, don't let it die...

But, if you do, 1 request: Give us an ending like The Ultimate Vision had, a grand, far future one, showing us that everything's gonna be swell.

That bit with Babe Ruth was pretty funny, the rest of the chapter excellent. I'm also waiting for your reply to the e-mail I sent ya some time ago.

Couple a possiblities here, Joe.

1. Oracle saves them
2. That's not them
3. They snuck onboard a shuttle
4. They got to an escape pod.

Brad. You know we love you.

But if you don't bring Double D back, we will all knife you.

Otherwise, awesome chappie.

I'm on the edge of my seet here. Did they bring any weapons with them? They should have brought Raven with them. She could have did her awesome bird thing and shadow teleport them out when the hull explodes. This one was a pretty sweet cliffhanger. I am certianly glad it was a simulation because I dont know how they could get out of a really Earth completly blows up.

All of Earth is dead! Why didn't the Zyrgans do that in the first place if they wanted to exterminate everything! I know they have morals but that Lodj doesn't. Dude! All of Earth! Is the Oracle going to take them back in time or something? ALL OF EARTH!! How are they going to get out of theis one. What do you think is underneath Duoble D's hat?

you are a really great writer as ive said before and you really bring in amazing depth to seemingly shallow elements...but perhaps a short chapter that focuses on a few charachters since you have over 30 recurrent charachters.its a little frustrating to keep up with all of them.