This story is the best ive seen in awhile, keep on writing.

finally! a good MalonLink story!

i have always liked them as a couple and am disappointed is some of these really bad stories!

anyway, as much as i want to murder Ingo myself, Link is such a great guy!

Yay! I'm your 200 reviewer jippy! So now that I've got that out of my system, I have to say that this story' awesome! Real great work! keep it up! Your an amazing author!

I thought this was very well written. I thought this was down to earth and wasn't far fetched in anyway. Things like this actually happen, and you protrayed Malon very well in her situation. I like how it wasn't just filled with fluff and Link didn't just ride to her rescue. It was really a great read and extremely enjoyable.

This was good from start to finish and that's surprising to me because I usually don't get into things like this. I do wish somebody would have killed Ingo though.

Amazing. Simply amazing. This story was so real and true and focused on something horrible that made her the strong woman she is, and yet you did it with such a tact and delicate handling of the situation that it never felt wrong. I especially loved how you handled the timeline shifts- the recounts of the "other" reality made me start to tear, about it how could and should have been. Honestly, this is one of the best stories I have ever read, and it's an inspiration as both a writer and a woman. Thank you for this. :)

Beautiful ending.

=D

i like you. humorous, arent you? you remind me of a little kid when you insist your musical taste is better than everyone else's.

anyways! nice story. i like it. you write it very, very well. ive only ever come across two other stories that are well-written. one of them is another legend of zelda and the other one is a crossover of harry potter and naruto. its writing talent like yours that makes me keep visiting this site. so thank you. =)

Nice, Malon actually wasnt the D.I.D. The Malink-ness bothered me...since I'm anti that but whatever. You didnt write this for that now did you? All that mattered was that Malon is queen of her domain. Too bad there werent any sharp knives around...

I didn't review when I fav'd this and I should've. Sorry. Anyway, I absolutely adore this story! It was so well written and just kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time I was reading it. You have cemented my love for the Malon/Link pairing. I love the character development and the plot was just amazing.

Hi there! I really thought I put a review up a couple of days ago, but I don't think I did, so here goes!

The first thing that came to my mind as I finished it (at one o'clock in the morning, THAT'S how into it I was, it's very captivating) was, "Shoot, is that IT?" It wasn't short, but good stories, in my opinion, should never end. And normally, I don't like stories with any mention of sex in them, but this one was an exception. I really want to read it again, and I think I will!

Congrats on the awesome story. ~Kirby

That was the most character-driven fanfiction I've ever read. Thanks for that.

I feel a tad superfluous; the tips I give to aspiring authors are already put to use here far better than I could do myself. So instead of constructive criticism, I'll tell you what I liked, and if any criticism comes to mind along the way, so be it.

I love your characterization. You've made this one of the most believable Zelda fics I've ever read; the characters (except Link, and that's only because of the fantastic nature of his experiences) are all people who exist in the real world, people to whom the reader can grow attached. The thoughts, the psychology, the actions, the reactions, they were all real.

Imagery was definitely a plus for you. The visual was good, but you really excelled in the auditory department.

The greasy marks made a compelling motif.

This was Malon's story, so I guess it doesn't matter much that I didn't like Link's character. But for whatever it's worth, I found him a tad unstable. Not his fault, but the point stands. I don't think this is constructive criticism... it's more expressing an opinion. Whatever.

Only because you asked me not to, I HATE INGO! LINK SHOULD GIVE HIM WHAT FOR! AND MALON SHOULD GO KUNG-FU ON THAT BUM'S HINDPARTS! Come to think of it, have you ever read a fanfic in which Ingo is a good guy? I mean, I've seen Dark Link and even Ganondorf turn over new leaves, but never Ingo.

But the psychology surrounding Ingo was quite compelling. The way you portrayed his subtle ascent to a position in which Malon feels powerless against him was quite realistic, albeit disturbing. I liked the developement of his character more than Link's; this guy was better crafted. But I hate the guy. Congrats on that!

Usually around here, the book is a lot shorter than the plot, if that makes any sense to you. You don't have that problem; thanks for keeping complete control over your pacing. You did admirably.

In short, this was a great way for you to experiment with literary techniques and an excellent read. I look forward to starting your other work soon.

With regards,
Huanir Emyndan

Very nice.
after reading this story and one other malink fic i was totally converted from zelink to malink its the best
tnx for providing us with a great story.
keep up the good work

honey write it the way you want not the way other people tell you to write and its a good story you make me feel as if i'm malon i'm sorry if i like a story i feel as if i'm in the story