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| mistressKC - wanteddeadoral... 2008-05-30 ch 7,  | abuseYou characterization is lovely. Jin sounds exactly as Jin should sound like. |
| banan 2007-03-03 ch 7, anon. | abusei loved this story. you should definitely write more like this. i love this show (even though i have only seen like five ep.) great job |
| bobalina 2006-12-30 ch 7, anon. | abuseIt was like stained glass. A stained glass 4-D pretzel. Mebbe a tesseract. Eating itself, anyway. Keep writing! Toodles, bobalina |
| DraejonSoul 2006-09-06 ch 7, | abuseI really should hurry growing up so I could write like you. I loved your simple descriptive narrative, and I can visualize how you love Jin enough to not insult him even when writing out his thoughts. You never fail to entertain and enthrall, Bee. And little folks like us are all the better for it. m(_ _)m |
| wellduh... 2006-09-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh. PS. CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT I LOVE YOU. |
| wellduh... 2006-09-01 ch 7, anon. | abuseIncredible. Getting to the end of this story left me with that weird sad-but-delighted-enough-to-burst feeling you get at the end of all really good stories. Fanfic really doesn't so that to me often. Adored imagery and stuff with leaves. Great symbolism and all that. Great work. |
| wellduh... 2006-09-01 ch 6, anon. | abuseI have decided that all your dream sequences are spectacular. That one in particular was really kind of terrifying. I really like Orin. |
| wellduh... 2006-09-01 ch 5, anon. | abuseI loved the dream about Shino. Also, the thing about Yukimaru. Aww! And the trees were priceless. |
| wellduh... 2006-09-01 ch 4, anon. | abuseAt this point I have to say that Jin, sick, is very very creepy. And the dream about the seppuku was amazing, as was the story about his motivations as a child. |
| Linay 2006-07-31 ch 7, | abuseI loved this story! Thanks so much for writing in the Samurai Champloo fandom |
| AuroraRose14 2006-07-21 ch 7, | abuseWow, the characters were all spot on, especially Jin (it's so hard to write him well but you did a terrific job!) I look forward to reading more from you! |
| AKA Hummer 2006-07-10 ch 7, | abuseThat was a great fic. I loved reading it in Jin's perspective. Your version of his thought process was very IC.. When I was reading his thoughts, I felt so... Jin-like.. Dunno how to explain it, but you did a wonderful job on his character... I especially liked the ending. Heh. |
| DeSilva 2006-04-20 ch 5, | abuse'the man (Mugen)had the stealth of a brain-damaged elephant' Hi-larious. But how does Jin even know what an elephant is? |
| Hollow-Willow 2006-02-17 ch 1, | abuseWow. I actually learned some life lessons from this jem... |
| Gagou 2005-12-02 ch 7, | abuseHello! I recently discovered Samurai Champloo, and instantly fell in love with Jin's character. While browsing through Unholy Union (looking for some good fanfics) I stumbled onto your fanfiction, and I don't regret it. What an amazing piece of insight into Jin's character. It is incredibly thoughtful, the pace is slow and fitting, and I think you nailed Jin's personality like no other. I love how you made him think about everything around him, his past, his comrades, his future... Of course, you also get several pluses in my book for using japanese words and making it seem perfectly natural, and for perfect grammar ;) I also love the way you made Jin reflect on /both/ Mugen and Fuu, without forgetting either one. Much love for the trio (even if the Jin/Fuu fangirl in me was secretly giggling at the sweet moments he shared with her ^^; ), and I'll add that Mugen's and Fuu's characterizations were really well-done too (they were complex characters, I love that). Well... I'll be reading this again, I think. Thank you for writing such a beautiful story! |