Very well done. Jin, Mugen, and Fuu were all in-character, since and that's the most important thing to me in fanfic, I'm supremely happy to have found this. Thanks for writing!

The humor and pacing in your storytelling is fantastic here. It feels just like this crazy series and Jin, Fuu and Mugen are wonderfully expanded on while remaining in character and true to their series self. Thanks so much for this, it's been on my fave list for a long time and I never reviewed...which is a shame!

A.. Somehow when I finish reading this fic, I feel content. Gotta love the Jin-Fuu-Mugen dynamics :) Great stuff!

You characterization is lovely. Jin sounds exactly as Jin should sound like.

i loved this story. you should definitely write more like this. i love this show (even though i have only seen like five ep.) great job

It was like stained glass. A stained glass 4-D pretzel. Mebbe a tesseract. Eating itself, anyway. Keep writing!
Toodles,
bobalina

I really should hurry growing up so I could write like you. I loved your simple descriptive narrative, and I can visualize how you love Jin enough to not insult him even when writing out his thoughts. You never fail to entertain and enthrall, Bee. And little folks like us are all the better for it. m(_ _)m

Oh. PS. CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT I LOVE YOU.

Incredible. Getting to the end of this story left me with that weird sad-but-delighted-enough-to-burst feeling you get at the end of all really good stories. Fanfic really doesn't so that to me often.

Adored imagery and stuff with leaves. Great symbolism and all that.

Great work.

I have decided that all your dream sequences are spectacular. That one in particular was really kind of terrifying.
I really like Orin.

I loved the dream about Shino. Also, the thing about Yukimaru. Aww!

And the trees were priceless.

At this point I have to say that Jin, sick, is very very creepy. And the dream about the seppuku was amazing, as was the story about his motivations as a child.

I loved this story! Thanks so much for writing in the Samurai Champloo fandom

Wow, the characters were all spot on, especially Jin (it's so hard to write him well but you did a terrific job!) I look forward to reading more from you!

That was a great fic. I loved reading it in Jin's perspective. Your version of his thought process was very IC.. When I was reading his thoughts, I felt so... Jin-like.. Dunno how to explain it, but you did a wonderful job on his character... I especially liked the ending. Heh.