It's a wonderful story well written. You wrote Danny's feelings real well. Screw that goddamned warden. XD

wow for a second there i thought that was really happening to Danny. cool story!

Awesome dream sequence. I can usually tell when an author's starting out a scene with a dream and not "reality," but I had no idea. You did it very convincingly.

I suppose I should just be thankful I didn't phase through the floor and land on the kitchen table... From that height, one of us would have broken, and I don't know that I could explain either outcome to my parents.

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It would be like chopping off an arm, but he could do it. Animals escaped traps that way all the time.

Danny hadn't lost. He still had his family, and he still had his friends.

Which is really the difference between "Public Enemies" and "The Ultimate Enemy," isn't it?

Another good introspective oneshot. Thanks for writing! :)

Nice philosophical and thinking about the future fic.

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Interesting mood piece. Indeed.

The quote at the end really fit.

Good fic. You scared me some with the first bit. XD

once again another beautiful master peace of work you have done. i love it, i can ttly see it happening and i wish i did see it couldnt you be one of the writers for the show. i wish maybe then it would have been even better and thats saying something. because it was really good to start with. later amazin dude

Nice quote and nice story. Keep up the good work!

You know, you just showed what Danny's true courage is in this story. Not fighting against ghosts, or getting in dangerous situations, but to keep going even when he believes he's risking losing the love of his family and his well-being.

The line at the end was awesome and set just the right mood.

oo i really like this... cool!

wow, not only was this awesome, it also struck a certain chord. Have you seen the danny phantom movie, ultimate enemies? IF YOU HAVEN'T, DON'T READ THE REST OF THIS REVIEW CUZ IT'LL BE A SPOILER BUT IF YOU HAVE GO AHEAD

anyway, when i read that last paragraph, it strongly reminded me of the movie; danny turned evil because he lost exactly what you said was keeping him sane-his friends and his family. you truly captured Danny's sentiments here; well done.

Pretty. "Hums" You're very good at introspection. I really felt like I was looking into Danny's mind. This is going in my c2.

Wow: your first Danny Phantom one-shot is really VERY good. Then again it seems you've had a few years of practice . (just realized you've been writing since 01) The fact it was a dream was a bit surprising, and the quote at the end fits Walker's statement well.

One of my favorite one-shots. You know, maybe you should do a sequel. If you don't it's pkay.