Still interesting, Mordacity. Keep up the good work.

i'm liking the story...i like having the different point of views from rory and lorelai. update as soon as u can i wanna know whats going to happen!!

Okay, you can not stop here, M! That was the wost depressing ending to a chapter I think I've ever read. Please update soon, and hav it not be as sad. Loved the visual of Luke in a pink ruffled tux. I think that'll be in my dream tonight... hopefully.

Great chapter! Update soon please!

i like this... update plz. =)

Very well done of course. Thanks. Keep going.
Ron

Sorry I didn't get around to reading your new chapters until just now. But anyway, they're very good. Keep up the good work. With this and other future stories you write.

Great chapters! please update again soon!

It was a bit confusing, cause you kept switching POV's and chapters and time frames, but I think I got it now. Great story so far. Your writing is poetic, and it's usually pretty perfect, and I hope for another perfect chapter soon.

Great chapter! Really sad!

wow! i just finished reading this fan fic and it is totally awesome. when i finished reading all i could say was WOW!

I like how you set up Rory's emotions -- how she clearly feels like everything has spiraled out of control. Great job!

Loved the profound inner thoughts of both Rory and Lorelai. You have captured the character beautifully. Congrats!
Now, I want more. PLEASE, PLEASE! I just watched, for the very first time, the season fianle and I couldn't help but screaming at the TV set when the screen faded to black! NO!! FIVE months until I can see more! So I have to rely on fanfiction to get me by. And let me tell you, your's is one of the best!
SO POST SOON!

Another great chapter.

You are on the right track. Don't stop now. Rory needs to realize the hurt she inflicted on her mother & that she will never have another best friend like her. You are doing well in bringing out her feelings. Bravo.

Ron.