Good story. I'll keep on reading it later, I'm interested to see where its going. ~SC

Aw, so romantic, I LOVE jazz music, sigh. Wish I could've been there! Hm, I don't think I like that Joseph guy be flirting with Lisa like that. He seems cool and all, but a majority of the nice guys I meet seem to turn into jerks, unfortunately. But, I hope he's different, but still he doesn't need to be around Lisa for long periods of time. anyways, can't wait to read the second part! Good job!

Yeah, I bet he wouldn't mind keeping his eye on Oliver's "lovely wife", lol. Just playing. As usual, cute. Lisa's gown sounds like the Cinderella dress. I'm sure she'll look great in it! UPDATE!

Bravo! Encore!! That was a vondaful story dahling!! Don't worry, I am definitely staying tuned in and I hope everything is going well. Take care, be safe and thank you vonce again dahling!!

Aw, that was really sweet of Olivah's motha! That is adorable how Olivah is looking out for Lisa too. Aw! Heehee, this story is absolutely vondaful dahling! Update soon!

AW, I loved this, Mr. Haney is SO sweet sometimes!! Hee hee, I always loved it when he showed Oliver the stuff he carried around on the truck with him, making it sound grander than what it really was. (sighs in a love-sick manner) Okay, that's enough, I totally am loving this story, UPDATE!

haha, "once this close moment between us is over, we're going back to normal". That was so cute when they hugged, I always liked it when they did father-son things. I'm glad Eb came back, the farm just wouldn't be the same without him!

Oh, Lisa and those hotscakes! I always enjoyed how Oliver shows contempt towards them, then turns around and fakes that he likes them. Poor Eb, I hope Oliver finds him so he can apologize.

Aw...that was really sweet! *Wiping tears from eyes* haha. Wow...can't wait for the romance part! Update soon!

I understand Oliver getting mad, but he didn't have to blow up like that in front of everyone. Poor Eb, I know he didn't mean it, I would have run off too. Oliver shouldn't have left Lisa on her first day home either, he should have stayed with her to see if she was going to cope all right. Uh, didn't see Mr. Haney anywhere (he's my favorite character), but that's all right, this chapter was super good. UPDATE!

"happy birthday!" That was hilarious, hank is so funny. Aw, they all took care of the farm for them, that was super sweet.

Aw...that was so sweet! I am glad that Lisa is better too. I know Olivah is glad also. Uh oh, I am in suspense again! I vonda vhat vill happen to make this turn dramatic again? Don't worry, I am staying tuned it!

Yay!! I am glad that Lisa is coming home! All this schtuff has happened and I nearly forgot the ball. Haha. Anyways...vondaful story and update soon!

Woo-hoo, she's awake! Don't ask why, but I'm surprised that Oliver DIDN'T go to the roof and yell that he was glad his wife was back. I would have, lol. Glad that things are happy again, UPDATE!

Aw, this is so heart-breaking. Poor Oliver, he tries so hard. I hope that talking to her helps out, I've heard that it does work in lots of coma cases.