Reviews for Separate Souls

Reviews For: Separate Souls - Reviews: Page 1 of 4

Crimson Daraku Shita tenshi 2008-06-13 ch 4,	abusePlease update this story soon i love it it's awesome!
Aya-Shoru 2008-01-07 ch 4,	abuseyay fire demon.
CelestialMoonDragon 2007-12-24 ch 4,	abuseCool. I think you got the plurals right. please update.
kagome102694 2007-09-30 ch 4,	abusePlease update
Puku 2007-08-12 ch 4,	abuseAhh, Hiei's here! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Great work! You are so good at keeping people in character.
jane 2007-06-25 ch 4, anon.	abusehey!evil cliffy...
ShinigamixGirl 2007-05-30 ch 4,	abusesob sob I really want to know what happened...What is going to happen anyway? Please update soon. Its so interesting...TT-TT @_@
Miss Kari -Kuramastrass- 2007-05-18 ch 4, anon.	abuse(I'm too lazy to log-in.) COME ON! I mean seriously, come on. You haven't updated since like before Christmas. I truly enjoy your story and if you ever need an editor, I'm you're girl! -smiles half-evilly, half-crazily- I love grammar, writing, and most of all editing. (That's why I only have one fic. up right now. I took them all down to edit them.) I'm going to go insane (more insane than I already am) if you don't flipping update soon! I know it's annoying to get reviews like this (the other reason why I only have one fic. up), but I am really going to go insane. I hate yaoi (so why I'm reading I do not know) but I do think you are a great writer with real potential to make it in the real world as a creative writer (if you like writing as much as I do, which is like more than living) and this story is really well-written (probably why I'm still here). I know it's been a while since I've read but I've been busy... Want me to play editor? PM me and I'll give you my email. But anyway, as annoying as I am about to sound... UPDATE SOON OR I WILL FLAME YOUR STORY SO BAD YOUR COMPUTER WILL GO UP IN SMOKE! Well, I probably won't flame you but... JUST FLIPPING UPDATE SOON! Thanks for taking this precious time out of your day when you could be working on updating to read my ranting. I appriciate it.
firedragongirl 2007-04-10 ch 4,	abuseOMG! XD That was a nice chapter! Please update soon! ^.^ Omg, Hiei's gonna be friggin **. XD That Yamikio dude is gonna get turned to ashes! Ha! XD
Du Weldenvarden Farcai 2007-01-24 ch 4,	abuseOMG! I love your story! PLEASE update soon! The Guarding Forest Friend~
GoldenKitsuneHime13 2007-01-17 ch 4,	abusenice story and hope u update soon! ^-^
Queen Caira 2006-12-11 ch 4,	abusePlease update soon. I love this fic! Just one thing though, I think Youko was a little too loud. He just seems like he would be more in control of his emotions and not cry out so much.
KyoHana 2006-12-11 ch 4,	abuseWhat can I say?!?! This chapter was nothing short of awesome! Not only did I love to see (and hear) Hiei's protective nature when it comes to his fox, but the scene between Kurama and Yamikio was wonderfully done!! You certainly do make the wait well worth it!!
i_banquet 2006-12-11 ch 4, anon.	abuseReally nice to see this story continued :) Can't wait to read more...soon ;)
Nyte Kit 2006-12-10 ch 4,	abuseThis was a very nice chapter. I'd really missed this story. So happy you've decided to update it now. This was a great representation of the Makai slave trade, I think. Also a great portrayal of a mission gone wrong. The last scene with the demon trying to rape Youko was great. Loved every bit of it. You described the struggles very well. Great job and update soon!!

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