This was great.

Nice work on this.

Something constructive for a fucked up, OOC pic, wherein you are just using the names Shinji and Asuka for some stupid characters you conjured out of nowhere.

This fic really do suck, as does the rest wherein some kind of boldness or some crazy attitude comes over Shinji and he starts acting like a whacko.

To ficj: This was one of the best one-shots I have ever read. Yami is an elite writer and does not need an ass like you telling him how to write. Do not review any fanfiction unless it is something constructive.

well this fic sux

Why don't you create a sequel?

I whould like to see what hapens next.

I think this is a more 'Shinji just fuckin pwned Asuka story'

I like Asuka too but hey in the series anyone would agree she neede a good stiff whack to the face.

I like it

I really do

very well done

amazing, and to continue my binge of honey sandwiches and your eva fanfics, all i have to complain about is that there are two spaces missing that should separate four words, right at the beginning of the second scene

I was very impressed with this story. I was touched and at the same time it drew me in to it. I would only reccomend that you spell check some more. Good Work.

- The Critic

THANK YOU!

YOU ARE A SAINT!

Makes sense. After all Unit 01 goes berserk more often then any other eva, that had to come from somewhere

one of the better nge fics i've read nice job. no faults atall

(claps) Excellent! _

This is going straight to my faves!

Ah yes, and the one person she cares about somewhere, has now left her. Person with severe abandonment issues pushes everyone away and when they finally leave, they complain about everyone leaving them. Dont you love self fuling personal issues?