after i read "trying to say goodbye" i thought i'd check out your other stories.

i love the way you write. touch of sarcasm here and there. loved this story. you should post your h/g stories on SIYE!

:D
Made me laugh out loud, and i absolutely love your characterisations of all of them. There are so many killer lines, but i think my favourites are Ron's "Seriously, though, what's an ovary?" and Harry's double with breasts.
Thanks so much for unleashing this upon the world- it's going on my favourites, and so are you, if i may ;)
keep up the good work!

Really funny. Miscommunication can do that to people.^^

You said ovaries 8-9 times. Omg though... Harry's twin except a girl...Great job!

BWAHAHAHAHAHA! I loved Ginny in this. Loved her snark and humor, and her bemusement with Colin, and his earnestness brought out her inner prankster. (Have had this happen too, and can so identify with it.) Enjoyed Ron's snooping experiences, and Hermione's Sirius comment (LOVED it.) The identity of Colin's mystery lady was just perfect. LOL! Hope you write some HBP. That book needs a humorous treatment,and practically begs for it.

...interesting...byes

Heh...you're funny. I've got this big goofy grin on my face now. (BTW, I didn't vote for him either...both times. *sigh*)

I must say that I've never read the word ovaries in a HP story before. I'm impressed.

As to the actual comment, this was lovely. I'm not much of a reviewer, but I've read your stuff and am impressed by all of the stories you've written. Your characters are well rounded and how I've imagined them from the books.

Thank you for not making Ginny some sensual love goddess. Ron was perfect.

Oh yeah, and one day, in a time of desperation and fear, I too will have to access my inner-Harry.

Keep up the good work!

Wow. That was hilarious. You do satire very well. Lots of random, obscure references are what make a parody great.

Cute. Ron's lack of knowledge about ovaries made me laugh aloud and splatter myself with cream soda. Nicely written. Funny. Good job.
Grade : B+

Hahaha! Nice, and as a side note, you actually guessed right on Lupin/Tonks. Well done.

I'm pretty sure I reviewed this on SugarQuill but I thought I should do so here too. Once again my favourite line was:

""She probably fancied Sirius."

"Who didn't?" said Hermione.

"What?" said Ron.

"What?""

... utter genius.

You stories never cease to amuse me.

-Tyn of ffaddix

I just... I love you. And I love all your stories.

once again..wonderful.
It seems that the best thing about your fiction is that they are the most random pieces of work. Which is obviously a good thing because thats what makes them original and hilarious. I mean, seriously..ovaries and do-re-mi...:)
btw..there is a minor error:
"Great. Oh, I'm interrupted your essay, aren't I? I can come back later."
Probably supposed to be "interrupting".
I know this sounds very reprimanding and picky but the fact that your story is smooth and just that minor error takes the tempo away. Without it, it flows perfectly.
Marotte

OMG!
ROTFLMAO!
This was brilliant!