um, this is confusing, your bringing in this character that is completely new, and theres no explaination for what she's doing there, yet she already seems very improtant, i'd be careful about that aspect in praticular, thats how mary-sues get made

LMAO!! UR SUMMARY GOT MY ATTENTION!

"Hogwarts"??

I WAS LIKE "WHAT THE **!?!?!?" AND LAUGHIN MAH ** OFF! XD

Her name's not Alexandra it's Seras. I love the relationship between master and servant.

hells ya cant wait to see were ur going to take it

This story doesn't make sense with the story that your supose to made, Alucard and Seras in Hogwarts. I hope the next chapter would be better... Keep writing like that.

keep up the good work. i like it!