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| j.c.kai 2008-02-13 ch 7, | abusei like this story very much keep on going ^^ |
| Reinna 2008-01-08 ch 7, | abuseaf;sdlkfjaslkjfsd I love this, especially how you switch between the past and the present with Amarant and Freya and Gudrun and all. I especially love the way Amarant and Freya interact with each other and how their 'relationship' is built up and executed. Your story is absolutely amazing. I don't really have any better words to describe it. |
| Starr Bryte 2007-10-25 ch 7, | abuse*squealsigh* I adore all of your fanfiction. I loved the dialogue in this one and the way the chapters flip back and forth. I adore Grunty and the way she and "Uncle Amajerk" snark back and forth at each other. On the offchance of sounding like an annoying fangirl throwing a tantrum... "I WANT MORE! I WANT MORE!" I love it all and wait paitiently impatient for your updates. Stay safe Stay healthy Sincerely, Starr Bryte |
| Shaolei 2007-07-23 ch 7, anon. | abuseAww.. I was hoping there'd be a new chapter soon. I love your take on Freya + Amarant and Yuffie + Vincent. Two of my favorite FF pairings. Keep it up! Oh, the Dragon onslaught was awesome. Write more soon please Ü |
| foxy grin 2007-07-22 ch 7, | abuseWow! This is a very powerful chapter of a well-written story--I feel like I could read it over and over again without tiring a bit. I especially love the wonderfully described action of the battle and the climax of Freya and Amarant's twisty bond. |
| KatSumeragi1313 2006-05-30 ch 7, | abuseAmazing.Simply amazing. Lately I've been going on AmaFreya story hunts and I've found what I'm looking for.Please keep updating! |
| Guile 2006-05-18 ch 1, | abuseMan, this is an amazing fic. I've always been a sucker for Freya/Amarant, and you really do write them beautifully. Hell, I even love Fratley in this one, and it takes a lot for me to actually like Iron-Tail. |
| kinokokichigai 2006-03-11 ch 4, | abuseWhat's carnal passion? Ask your father-100% gaurunteed he'll have a funny reaction! Please update soon! |
| Taking Thursday 2006-02-26 ch 7, | abuseOkay, well normally I would have just gone past this fic, but I thought the title was interesting and now I'm glad I read it. Gudrun is such an unpleasant character, (mentally and physically) but I really enjoy reading about her, I guess it's because of all her flaws that makes her interesting. I love the interaction between her and Amarant, and I have a sneaking suspicion that he's her real father and that's why she's deformed. Am I right? Hmm... Update soon! |
| ShinakaStar 2005-12-07 ch 7, | abusePLEASE CONTINUE!! There's nothing like Freya x Amarant lime to start the day off. Of course, she's dead now...Sigh. ~~*ShinakaStar*~~ |
| DK 2005-10-08 ch 7, | abuseI've never really liked FFIX that much, especially when it comes to fanfic. I guess on some level it just never really spoke to me. It's obvious, however, that it has spoken to you, and the way that you share this is as pleasing to someone who didn't enjoy the game as it is to one who did. My, but you make these characters come to life. It's the little things, really; not that the dynamic between Freya and Amarant isn't handled extremely well (I love the dialogue, and the way that you show what each can offer the other), but little bits about Captain Edda feeling her age, or the brief but masterfully executed characterization of Puck. And Gudrun, well, is a rather enchanting little mongoloid. I even find myself feeling the kind of exasperated pity and general annoyance with Fratley that Freya did, despite my best efforts to hate the gimp. I'm not going to belabor the obvious and repeat myself from the other review. You've crafted some really beautiful sentences here, and realized some excellent characters, and entertained immensely. Can't wait to see more. P.S. Words can not express how much I hate you for making me like AMARANT. I just wish I'd seen the version you write in the game. I guess I didn't have to, though, because you did. |
| Amanda Swiftgold 2005-09-25 ch 6, | abuseThe dialogue is utterly hilarious and seriously awesome. *nodnod!* |
| Amanda Swiftgold 2005-09-25 ch 4, | abuseAh! The insults! *Sigurd!* I wanted to squee over that kid and give him a good thump in turns. *smirk* So much fun. |
| Amanda Swiftgold 2005-09-25 ch 2, | abuseHa-ha! Man, that's great. Just the right mix of humor and mystery. Yaknow, the Beatles' "Eleanor Rigby" always reminded me of Amarant and Freya for some strange-ass reason, and I wanted to write something with it but never did. This gives me the same feeling of going along with the song, though it's better than I could have done with the theme. Rock. |
| Amanda Swiftgold 2005-09-25 ch 1, | abuseOoh, nice. I must read the rest now. *goes to do so!* |