I love this song! Especially when Michael Crawford sings it!

Have you seen the staged musical? It's a must!

The original novel by Leroux is pretty good, too. :D

Hey! Lovely work here!

The O.G. recommended this to me, so here i am! Nice writing. hehe. The Phantom seems like a little kid or something here. "YA FIRST GIRLFRIEND!" lol. Cute.

Owh! I always wanted to do something like this, and now you did it before me! And so well too!

Oh my, that was wonderful! I've never read anything like this before. I was there with him...I felt his passion. Beautifully done, Mademoiselle!

SJ

This was beautiful. I loved it. It is like you wrote from the very depths of his soul. Amazing job.

Awesome! I loved it. You just seemed to capture his thoughts perfectly. I could just see him thinking all that. Great job. I loved it!

good. and kind of funny! I love this song and i love the way Gerard butler sings it. oh hell i jsut love the phantom!

-phantomlover

Oh, this is so cool. I love how you kinda' made it into a songfic. Maybe you can do this with some of the other songs. Just a thought.

This is a beautiful story. I think it captures Erik's thoughts and personality perfectly. Well done, mademoiselle! The only thing wrong...you spelled a few words wrong. Women should be woman, and threw should be through. Small errors, but the rest of it completely makes up for it! Again, well done, and I hope to hear more from you. Yours truly,

~The Prophet of Hell

Wow, that's really good, for a 1chappie! Thanx for all your help, btw. And, just because I know your my bff *grins sheepishly* and you won't kill me, "a real women" in the last paragraph should be "a real woman"...*ducks, expecting knife*

Good! nicely written, and not another one of those Mary-Sues!