Hello

I did not like this too much...lol...hear me out.

The first shocker was the words " they would die. Even Shishio"...because Shishio more than the words "flesh of the weak..." had made impact on Soujiro.

2nd, Soujiro's characterization...didn't seem right. distinctly because u messed up the quotes, if u want the exact one's u can go to Maigo-Chan's site. The lines go Soujirou: I ought to be on my way, grandmother. Thank you.

Tea Lady: Where are you headed?

Soujirou: Where indeed. I don’t have any particular destination. I’ve decided to wander for ten years.

Tea Lady: Ten years, now.

Soujirou: There were two men-they walked the same road, but after ten years they discovered completely opposite truths. So I think if I wander for ten years, I’ll be able to find my own truth. But let me ask you, grandmother, where does this road go?

Tea Lady: I’m not really sure, but it heads north.

Soujirou: North. It’s getting warmer. North might be good.""

Very sorry for making this so long...Gomen.

Anyway...the writing still holds ur simple pleasant pace. Which make the abrupt switches into thought all the more appealing.

Bye

WHY DON'T LET HIM MEET MISAO?HUH?

u suck

I once come up with an idea like this but didn't type it out so...*sweatdrop*

U have a unique style!

TWO years!ten years is too much!

*BIG grin* (don know what to say more than grinning)

AW!WHY DIDN'T LET! SOU-chan meet MISAO-chan along the way? .

You left us hanging with DC,I HATE YAH!*cry*

beautiful one shot!Could you shot more?.

I liek your fic,I always wonder about Sou's smuile but I can't write it on paper like u,you did open my mind!THANKS!

...That was really very nicely written I love Soujirou!D

very thoughtful and well-written!

I hope you didn't forget your others stories!:) XD

you're great! :)

A very nice one shot, though I think you should have put a little bit more...

Mandy G.