OH NO

GLOWING EYES?

MYSTERIOS PAST?

SOUND THE MARY SUE ALARM!

Dude I like your story but a little advice, don't rush the last paragraph, it's like giving a person to much info in a short amount of time. Other than that your story is awesome! Keep updating!

interesting... it's like she has superpowers... works for me! since I reviewed u, u need 2 review me, k? The Necklace is the story, Avatar, of course! My summaries always suck, so just R&R.