 Cassandra 2002-11-26 . chapter 3 Love the sequal. I liked you first one better, though, but this one is still great! |
 Setsunna 2002-05-20 . chapter 3 So happy! I really like this story and i hope you are to! HAPPY HAPPY HAPPY! |
 EmberMaxximus 2002-04-22 . chapter 3Great story! |
 Neun 2001-12-03 . chapter 3This is really really really *gasp* really great!! ^_^ |
 kristy 2001-09-29 . chapter 3 that is SO good!!!!! ^_^ |
 Drac 2001-09-08 . chapter 3this is good i love it!!!! |
 Logan 2001-07-06 . chapter 3 Amazing ending. The captive choosing the destiny that her captor laid our for her instead of that which she was born into. Just simply amazing. |
 Kaji 2001-06-09 . chapter 3 this is really good ^_^ i liked the first story and i like this one to. please continue this, it's really interesting |
 Gaia Faye 2001-05-27 . chapter 3Once again, I loved it! ^.^ Maria! Say it loud and it's music playing! Say it soft and it's almost like praying... I LOVE West Side Story! Woo! Poor Maria... She dreamed of going back to Chikyuu for so long and when she got the chance it wasn't as she thought it would be... ::sighs:: Anyway, good job, and I'm off to read the next installment of this series... |
 Allister 2001-05-04 . chapter 3 Great fanfic but I must admit, I am puzzled by one reaction in the various reviews. Why is Anthony seen as a bad guy? Sure, Ru isn't as bad as Epinard but he did rape Maria and I honestly don't think Maria was totally in her sane mind when she made that choice between Earth and Vegetasei. Not to say that I don't think the trilogy was bad. On the contray, I thought it was one of the most original ideas ever. Most writers have Saiyains acting like "noble warriors" but the truth as said by both King Kai, King Vegeta and Freeza was that saiyains were brutal planet pirates. Vega is one of the few authours to stay true to this. Hats off to Vega for having such an engaging storyline. P.S. There is a documented syndrome regarding "captured" slaves. It's called the Stockholm syndrome where the victim falls in love with the captor and comes to identify more with the captor than with their own loved ones.
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 AquaBlueGoddess 2001-04-21 . chapter 3 A wonderful story. I'm so happy you made a sequel. I love it. Can't wait to find out what happens next. |
 Logan 2001-04-21 . chapter 2 Now this is a twist, a kinda soft saiya-jinn king, humans roaming the galaxy, an old friend of Mayra's... all the ingredients needed for an ending that will stay in my mind for a long time to come. On to the third chapter... |
 Logan 2001-04-21 . chapter 1 Wow, I can't say much more than that was simply spell-binding. As much as Vejii has taken to Mayra's singing, so have I taken to your writing. You truly are a master storyteller. |
 fei 2001-04-16 . chapter 3I adore this story. I can't put my finger on what makes it so great but it is, as is its previous story. I do hope that you'll write more of this some day. |
 Patricia Allen 2001-04-06 . chapter 1 this is such a good story i'm thinking of writing one but i don't really want to, but i love the story. |