i think you shoul add more too the story. and where li went, more details. other wise it was very good

AHHHH! That was so funny! Though thats really not how it happened. After she captured the Earthy he changed in some ally around sunset. (Sakura still freaked)Anyway if someone has not already told you the exacts e-mail mwa! You have inspired me to write a story called 'Yikes'! I will post tommorow night. Arigato!

Not bad.

_Cute! The thing is that Sakura's reaction was much more drastic than this.

But anyway, its innovative of you to try to write this! Ganbatte!

Cool. Question do you have a picture of Kero in his transformed state? Cuase if you do I have been wanting to find one.

Interesting... but anything based on CardCaptors is bad