A great story. Very good.

Fantastic! Liked the Yoda bit best, I did. Talk like that occasionaly, I do.
And the ending, the very very ending... So very sad and angsty... I think, if you wanted to, you could make a whole story out of it.
Peace~ Hawkstra

Good, very good! You do a nice job with all these minor characters we never really think about. But that's one of the beauties of fan-fic. the Yoda - speech got a little trying; it's good there wasn't more of it. But on the whole, this was a very good piece!

Hey,
This is one of the first SW fics I've read. I'm not a huge SW fan, but I appreciated your review so I thought I'd check it out. This is actually very well written and you do a great job of hinting at each character's identity without necessarily naming them. It was rather saddening. But good.
~Lady Sun

That was great. I really enjoyed reading it. Did well to estapblish the back story for the EpIV. Would work on character diolouge a bit.

This is really amazing. I especially liked the parts told by Luke and Anakin. Very sad! Also Unique I don't think I've read anything like this.

Very nice story and I liked the different perspectives, especially as you progress forward in time.

I also liked the end where Vader and Anakin are almost like two separate individuals.

Good Job!