Wow i liked it all. I wonder what will happen next.. Cant wait for more...

I like it so far, please update soon

cool i loked it! :D
update soon

yay this is good keep going Sara Young

this is good keep going can't wait to see what happens Sara

Good story! plz update soon!

This is pretty cool! I love the part with the rat. Please update soon, I can't wait to find out what it going to happen.

This was juvenile and pathetic. Even though it's not written this way, it reads like "Oh, wow, we're like, gonna have a baby, and, like, we're gonna get married." These characters are adults. Write as if you were.

LOVE THIS!

Cath/Warr my fave pairing :) and i love camping stories!! a little grammar, puncuation and spelling work needs to be done. .otherwise good :) x

An interesting idea and you write it well. Please post more soon!

LittleWebby :-)

Awesome story, I think yuo should keep it going, maybe, like a wedding for Cath and Warrick, and Griss and Sara can be getting real close... if you know what I mean - wink- lol.
great job! If you ever need any help, my email is

Great story! Are you continueing it?

the p[uch thing is very Anastasia!! but i love it i thought, sara would wake up forget where she was and puch grissom or scream or soemthing!! hehehhee

Aw this story is so sweet.
Kimmie

Hi !!
I'm surprised it's already the end !!
I'm happy Grissom save Sara from the cuncumber :) and she joked with it !!
I think you need to write a sequel with the wedding of Warrick/Catherine and with the fact Grissom and Sara could be together !!
See you
Megara1