Okay, so shouldn't this be the third part of the other one that I wanted you to write a third part for? Or? Anyway, I LIKE this. Twisted, funny and downright odd... as long as people write stuff like this, all IS well with the world. :)

You have a screwed sense of humor, you know? not that thats a bad thing. very good fic.

Pretty good. I always thought that Jean and Nimufu should get together. I don't know about Katt and Ryu, but it could happen. Isnt Nina going crazy a little extreme? I mean she survived being exiled because of her black wings. Well, I hope you give her a good personality.

Another great BoF2 fic! I'm glad to finally see one dedicated to Jean, and a good one at that! I can't wait for your next fic!