loved it update soon

ur story's awesome plz continue...but here's a suggestion...maybe you should put an author's note, disclaimer, and a summary. your story is good but it needs a new format.:) god luckers!

i like it! you should also do one from Keel's point of view. i like your style of writing. it's very good. keep writing!

i like it! you should also do one from Keel's point of view. i like your style of writing. it's very good. keep writing!

o god! soo dull! Try to add a little imagination to it,gracias

I'm guessing you're expanding on the last Pheely scene in VirtuDate. I'm also guessing that you're guessing that this is when Phil realises he's got a humongous on her. ;)

I like it so far; very interesting, and I like the way you've described a lot, but left enough for ourselves to guess. No, this is *really* good.

And very in-character, too. I can completely imagine Phil having this conversation with himself on the show. You've tallied up some of the moments in the show with this one, too.

And awesomely written, really. =D I love the line: "She tells me everything, I tell her everything, and we tell no one anything." and also the one that goes: "...knew this math backwards, forwards, upside down, and in zero-gravity." And I *love* the last few lines. Perfect ending. For a standalone?

You said 'musings...' in your summary. Now, I've had enough experience with fics to know that this either means this is a standalone, something you don't know whether you want to continue, or something you *will* continue but want to keep in mysterious. Typically I'm banking on the last option, but hey, lovin' it as it is. =)

Write more POTF fics soon!! In the mean time I'll go check out your other fics. =D

Wow. That was very cool. I can actually picture Phil having a conversation with himself like that in the show. That was a very insightful piece, I really liked it. Awsome job! Were you going to continue with the story any? (hint,hint)

AH! more please! i like the line "she tells me everything, i tell her everything, and we tell no one anything." so cute!

Hey! This was a cute POV from Phil. Good to see you're writing again and in new categories, too.