This makes a wonderful twoshot. Actually doesn't matter if you finish it or not. Good work.

This looks like it shall become quite interesting... I'll be reading.

No... happy... ending...? *makes disbelieving puppy dog eyes*

I like it! Keep going!

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This is cool; I love how Erik isn't... sane. It's better when he's crazy, don't you think? He has to at least have long-drawn conversations with himself... or to do something like that with the manakin (sp?)

hehe bb xx

Yes. Definitely happy, or at least let us use our own imaginations. Write as you will, but I think that it would be really great if you wrote it so that Erik and Christine are in a position where we can make up whatever ending (always a happy one, of course) we want to.

Again, I say, it is YOUR story, and you may do as you wish... or whatever your characters wish anyway...

Lauren

Well that was lovely, angsty lovely that is. A great variety of emotion and thoughts; very nicely depicted. I enjoyed it even though I was in a hyper mood, but it felt a bit weird. lol. Luv ya, *hugs* Later Kagome-chan. ^_~

PLEASE "continue this and make it a real story"! I just read it and I think it could really go somewhere. (just as long as it's EC ;p )

I'm so happy you decided to keep this fic going, i really like it. I'm also interested to see where you take it. Keep on writing.
-RD

Heya! I was wondering why you hadn't been updating Love of Music. *pouts* lol. This seems pretty good, regardless of how you have no plot in mind for it. :P Wouldn't it be amusing if it ended up being an oober long fic and everybody knew this one better than all your other ones? Hah.

ANYWAYS. I was just wondering if you had AIM? Cause, if you do, I was wondering if I could have your s/n. Mine's xoEclipzexKitT. If you don't or don't feel comfortable giving it out or whatever, though, that's fine, too.

Anxiously awaiting a new chapter from my favorite author. =D

Well, I just realized I hadn't reviewed this chapter yet. My apologies, my dear, I could have sworn I had. Oh well. This story proves to be interesting even in this extremely short chapter. I love how you can write so little yet still show so much insight into the future of this story. It's wonderful. Uh...yeah.

Ah, mi amiga muy bien! This chapter was very interesting. Granted, it is just taking off so I know I must still give it time, but I'm already getting excited about where the characters will take this story.

Very good! Did Erik passted away? My thoughts on this story is very sad to what ever happen to the chacters or what ever happen.

oh the angst! update soon.

well, yes, i am all for happy endings, but, as you said, it is the characters that will choose where this story will go. so, it is not our choice :o). this chapter was beautiful. you displayed his feelings wonderfully. i am really looking forward to more! i was shocked when he didn't pick her up off the floor of her dressing room. i was also very pleased that he didn't :o). please update soon! i'm very interested in more!