I saw it. I saw it. I saw the Kyou Kara Maou reference. XD
Awesome.

BUT THE DAWN IS COMING! XD

Ratio is a self denying baka... but that makes it SO funny! XDD

Holly ** on the first ending
You writing is very good, and as much as it shocked me, the ending was brilliant

This. Is. Awesome.

All i can say at this point... must. Keep. Reading. @.@

Awesome!
Loved reading it.
End of story.

I like the plan to seduce L with cake, and that Ryuk is actually smarter than Raito about it.

The footsie in this chapter is extremely cute. I love it that footsie manages to knock out Raito.

In this chapter, I really love this manipulative line from Raito:

"“I’m sorry, I didn’t mean…I mean…if you don’t think that I’m your best friend, that’s fine…But it’s just,” he paused for dramatic effect, “You’re mine.”"

I really love the way L is so obsessed with "Iron Chef" in this, and so oblivious, and Raito is so extremely arrogant about his charm and intelligence. It is extremely cute and funny and fluffy the way you've written this.

I really love chapter one!

I just have one nitpick, about the Author's Note to chapter one, which was probably written ages ago, so a mistake is understandable, but...

"Raito" is perfectly fine to use in fanfics, however, it isn't "the direct translation from the original Japanese" which would either be the Japanese word for "light" or the usual Japanese pronunciation of the moon kanji that is used for his first name, neither of which is "Raito".

"Raito" is actually an attempt to phonetically spell a Japanese mispronunciation of the English word "Light". I'm sure you know that by now and it's an old Author's Note anyway, but I sometimes fixiate on details like that, and if you fix your Author's Note you'll look smarter to anyone else starting the story and stop nitpickers like me from whining about it.

Anyway, great first chapter and I look forward to reading the rest of the story! Thanks for writing this!

This was freaking hilarious. I normally don't like yaoi, but this was an enjoyable story. Just imagining Raito thinking some of the things he thought in his serious Kira voice made my day. :D

One of the chapters Ryuk was watching them...That had to be one of the funniest (and slightly disturbing) ways to end a chapter. XD

Seriously, you guys did a really good job. It was a bonus that the characters weren't all OOC.

Keep up the good work!^^

~Neko-lily

But... But I wanted them to do it. :(
Genius ending but I was hoping they'd hook up

Was I supposed to laugh at that end? Cause I did. Quite hard.

I almost ** myself laughing reading that whole thing. It was brilliant