aw... that's rather depressing. Good job! in fact, great job... please, please, PLEASE write a sequel. :D

Hey! Great story so far! PLZ CONTINUE!

PLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZ CONTINUE! MORE! GREAT STORY! WANT TO READ MORE!

I absolutely adore your fic ! PLEASE WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER! Oh and did I mentioned that this is a great story !

Peace out,

Devil Hunter.

ooh...continue! this is great i must say you really have outdone yourself.

Dang... That's actually something I never thought about. The simple fact of just how powerful certain Chosen's kids could be. Well, I hope you do continue this, or that someone does. It has the makings for a very good storyline. _

Excellent raw footage! The first of a painful sequence of possible events leading to 50:02 of which a continuation is eagerly awaited. Mature content or no, battle on!

Cool LA. I love your work. ****

Man.. Raw deal.

Although, I think Azulongmon may just be missing more than a few facts, such as a child tends to only recieve -half- from either parent.

Please continue! This promices to be very interesting. :)

A really good fic, and I think it leaves a lot of possibilities open for exploration. What I would really be interested in seeing, is an aftermath type fic from the perspective of each of the Yagamis. In Tai's case it would be especially interesting if it was done while he was facing the threat Quinglongmon was talking about. Anyways, they're just ideas, and I'm really looking forward to anything you put out.

Please continue. There's got to be more!

I like it. You created a decent explanation of the final pairings at the end of the 2nd season, so I am feeling some closure. Thanks!

Wowie, Arch! This is cool! I can't wait for the sequel to this, and if it is NC-17 (and i hope it is!) I'm sure it'll be the same kind of quality I've come to expect from you- sheer perfection.

PDM

IM NOT 17 YET! PLEEZE DONT MAKE IT NC-17, R IS FINE!PLEEZE! I NEED TO NO WHAT HAPPENS! PLEEZE, JUST RATE IT R, PLEEZEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! LEMME NO WHAT U DECIDE, PLEEZE JUST R, THOUGH, PLEEZEEEEEEEEEEE!