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| bufallo have wings 2005-10-16 ch 8,  | abusei love it! just one thing: you should probably use more contractions when people are talking. can't wait for the next chapter:) |
| valkrys 2005-09-20 ch 7, | abuseoh Seth!! Detective is definitely not the right job choice for him!! I was so happy that Helena didn't seem to remember anymore what she'd done, but obviously it's all coming back now, damn!! I'm worried what she's planning with Seth... I kinda feel that at the end of the story all of Newport's teenagers will be hanging down the ceiling like Oliver... Keep going please!! |
| valkrys 2005-08-30 ch 6, | abuseOMG!! What a turn of events!! But I must admit, I'd have done the same thing in Karen's position... I'm not really sure about the Ryan/Marissa thing... But I guess that once they'll figure everything out, they see that nobody can withstand the trusk family... hopefully it won't be too late for them. Loved the Summer/Seth bit!! Lots of humor, just how I like it!! Please continue soon!! |
| slimkay 2005-08-29 ch 6, | abuseGreat chapter! Update ASAP! |
| slimkay 2005-08-13 ch 5, | abuseNice story!! |
| valkrys 2005-08-10 ch 5, | abuseFirst, welcome back! Haven't heard of you in a long time ;-) I still have no clue what Helena is up to, except I fear there is going to be blood... And I have the feeling you're not a Marissa/Ryan shipper, but I guess there is some truce about them NEVER having a steady relationship ;-) Can't wait for more, although I wanna kill that evil ** with my own hands ;-) |
| valkrys 2005-07-25 ch 4, | abusebeautifully written as usual!! and so evil... gosh I hate her!! Poor Ryan, hopefully he'll figure everything out before it'll be too late... |
| Kay 2005-07-09 ch 3, anon. | abuseOMg this si dark and good please upodate soon |
| Zbyszko 2005-07-02 ch 1, | abuseWhy does Helena fly from LA to Newport Beach? According to Mapquest, the 2 cities are about 40 miles apart. |
| Rach CD McKenzie 2005-07-02 ch 2, | abuseWow, this is really good! I love your writing style, it's really different and unique. I like where this is going. Helena sounds just as crazy as Oliver and she's going to kill Ryan!! uh oh!! Please post soon |
| valkrys 2005-07-01 ch 2, | abuseWow! That was a great chapter!! Helena is so mean! And of course, she's perfectly fine in her head... I was really hoping for some Ryan/Marissa action ;-( Why can't this girl resist a bottle of liquid? Man... Anyway, I can't wait to see what exactly the plan of Helena is. After the killing in chapter one I fear the worst... Please keep the chapters coming!! |
| valkrys 2005-07-01 ch 1, | abuseAh, Helena is back! ;-) That sounds terrifying! She just killed her aunt and uncle but hey, she doesn't at all come after her brother!! Hopefully Ryan will be able to stop her... I don't want Marissa dead, please?! |