That was sad but with cool rhymes. The Angel of Death was visually interesting, but the rhymes were my favorite part. Creepy pretty, not pretty creepy.

My dreams aren't fit for writing, so I like your idea. The story was good, and I liked the use of the claws, very good.

You're dreaming about Jean in lingerie? I'm not saying nothing...

ok.. dude... i read your story.. and i don't know whether to state i actually liked your work.. or to tell you to get psychiatric help immediately.. i mean.. come on man... who dreams about the x-men when they sleep... umm... don't answer that. hehe. but really... good work. i like stories where the authors are able to describe the different emotions being felt by the characters in details. it makes reading the story more personal on some level i guess. and you have clearly done a very good job at it. please update soon and keep up the good work.

i thank the subconcious.

i think that it is definetly possible that i am weider than you. i've only been an x-men fan for two years. you can only beleive how po i was when it was cancled. i basicly saw the first 3 seasons. since i started watching evolution at mindbender (which probably explains why i'm a jott fan) i thought that when it went back to the begining that that was like still season one or something. it's kinda confusing. but hey i was 12 and stupid. i also hadn't met my current friends. that probably has something to do with it. please update on the outside of eden. can't wait for the sequal to the seatbelt sign should be on at all times. that is my favorite story of all time and you are my fav author of all time because you actually updated. jen1703 hasn't updated in over a year! she used to my number 1 writer. yea for frequent updaters

JOTT FOREVER

Marvlix

really cool and kinda sad. poor x23. i don't know what else to say about this chapter. but it kinda sounds like what i daydream, somehow when i sleep all my dreams are good, but when i have daydreams they're all bad.at least it keeps me awake in class. keep the updates coming.

i think this is a really good idea. i can relate to everything you just said. i think this will be really cool cause everything you is :)