wow i wish there was more of this i love it

...are you sometimes quoting from Pirates of the Caribbean too? I could almost swear I heard the disinclined to acquiesce there... and a few other stuff I recognized... xD

*salutes author's weird imagination and mad creative skillz*

-Jaeh xD

Would you believe people are still reading this story? I love it

Hah. I've been reading this and Hole, and now I get to the last chapter you've uploaded...and I want more...*pouts* You're so mean.

It's been more than a YEAR! Stang it all, where are you? I would rather like to see more of this. I'm tempted to go get drunk, pass out, time-space travel, and stalk you so that you upload more chapters. You said that there were only three chapters left. Please give them to us! I don't think I have strong enough drink to travel, but I'm willing to test it out! ...I just hope I don't end up in Anartica...that would suck...like Hoth.

I like the Captain "Foray" character, and have guessings as to who he is. But I'd LOVE confirmation, so UPDATE! Also, I love the Twitchy Skywalkers. Haha, they keep twitching, it's so funny!

I think this story's really fun, in a sort of wild ride way. My favorite bit is when Vader visits the imprisoned Padme and freaks out - his problem with trying to identify her with Leia made me a little confused as to when this Vader version came from - he's obviously post ESB, but Vader didn't know about his daughter until ROTJ. But that's something for the future, most likely

One important thing to bring up - the last half of the chapters from 9 and 10 are missing; the sentences just cut off and there's no more text. Thought you should know.

Some unstructured random thoughts from along the way:

"Han-sicle" – I love it! If only Jabba had called him that in RotJ. What is that in Huttese?

I want to see Wes’s napkin. Somehow, I have a feeling that a glob of mustard is very pivotal to his plan.

Anakin being upset about Luke’s hand reminds me that while Vader knows everything that’s going on, Anakin only knows the basics. And this whole time I’ve been worried about how confused Luke is going to be when he finds out he’s got two fathers. Leia would be just as lost, lol. And I love Anakin hitting his head up against the wall and calling himself an idiot. Now THAT is funny!

"After landing at the Senate building and frightening half of the Senate simply by stalking around . . . " I would so pay to see Vader doing that, lol. I’d also pay to hear him say, "That sounds incredibly stupid." I can just hear it in James Earl Jones's voice. :) I Love this!

" . . . a Gungan on death-sticks . . ." now there’s an image, lol.

But anyway, I’d have had other comments, but I got too caught up in the reading.

Please do hurry with the other chapters! (Trying to keep all of this straight is killing me, lol.)

Oops, almost forgot . . . . JELLO!

BOBA FETT! ha, I really have nothing else to say except- more! MORE MORE MORE! (you may have noticed... I have a teensy obsession... oh well) And if you want to reply, use the... whatever-it-is, the review-thingy. WHy do we have to do that anyway? Why aren't we allowed to reply inside our chapters anymore? Not fair! We should get a say in this!

"Dr. Jones is a Scottish Lord, and the Emperor is Mickey Mouse."- Best line ever! I love Indiana Jones! ANd the lines from Pirates of the Carribbean- classic! And who is Kayl... Luke Skywalker from the previous universe? Hm... cause I know the others (Hobbes, Spiro, etc.) must be Han + Rogues... right? And Tessa Stargate... hm, the only one I can think of for her is Mara Jade, though that wouodn't make any sense... at all... THRAWN REBELLION! BRILLIANT! Cause Thrawn and Pellaeon are just completely amazing, and I love them to death- almost as much as Boba Fett! (but not quite...)

Well, I'm babbling, so I should probably go... plus, I have to work on my own fiction... Beneath the Surface. So, see ya!

Jade Rhade

This is awesome! I love the rewrite, and the Sith meetings - not to mention the Rogues - are hilarious! Although I guess Luke's forgetting that Qui-Gon *told* him Vader was from another reality, isn't he?
Oh well!
Please, update soon, I can't wait to read more!
Lol, Tanydwr
P.S. Happy Christmas!

LOL as always i love your chapter!! Sorry it took me so long to read and review i was busy the 24&25 and then school, so this morning i decided to print out half of the chapter and read it in school and the rest at home. i dont mind that chapters are this long i think that it makes it a little better that way the author can take his/her time to write it and we dont get a punny chapter but a nice long one.

anyways wonderful chapter! Got to love Rouge Squad!
go Wes!

Jade

You know, just when I get really confused and this makes no sense, something else falls into place and it makes perfect sense again. Either that or we're both crazy, lol.

What the heck is Vader up to anyway?

Okay, okay, okay. You forgot the Jello in this chapter. Hoth would have been perfect for Jello pudding pops, don't you think? (Although heaven only knows what Rogue Squadron on mess hall duty would have done with a box of Jello pudding pops. Grafiti on the walls perhaps?) And suddenly I have an image of Vader walking through the hallways at the Hoth base, surrounded by stormtroopers. Passing a small kitchen, he ducks inside and rummages through the refrigerator. "Oh, pudding pops!" he exclaims happily, ripping the wrapper off. He pushes he pudding pop up to his mask and then "oh man, no fair!" as he realizes that there is no way for him to eat the pudding pop with his mask on.

Somehow the "go to Dagobah" scene was much more amusing with Qui-Gon than it was with Obi Wan. (I mean, really can you imagine Obi Wan's ghost refering to the council as "goofs?") lol

"It ate my blaster. Don’t ask." Now THAT's the scene I wanted to see!

"That was weird. It felt like I was kissing my sister." If only their parents had been there . . . this is why you need to tell your children important things . . .

Oh, and you might consider getting some cameras up on Dagobah. I'm thinking the Jedi Council would make a pretty good reality show to broadcast on the HoloNet, you know?

And I think this version is much more tramatic for Luke than the original. You might consider getting him a therapist. This time around he's got TWO fathers, sort of . . . well not really . . . okay I'm confused again . . .

This was the most awesomest chapter EVER! I was LMAO when I read all the holovid scenes. Keep it up!

NOO! THE EMPIRE'S BACK!

...this can't be good...

O...Let's see Luke's repeat performance of "The Blowing Up of the Death Star"...*grin*

Sweet...

Hahaha...you have such a way with the little random things people say...like Mara calling Luke "Skywalker". Of course, I'm so used to it, I barely noticed it...