Yeah, this was more creepy then funny...

"...caught his face with his mouth." 0.0 Bwahahaha!

OOH! Cute! OOC is okay when you've got an excuse or it's a crack fic...it was cute! Yup yup.
Alright, well, keep writing FMA! I liky!
Caro-Chan

Oh Edward! So silly indeed!

Though Beaver!Ed is somewhat frightening... But all the more captivating. Ah.

OMG, so funny!

Kari:You looked cute in the beaver suit.
Ed:That thing was oversized...
Kari:You still looked cute to me...
Ed:He blackmailed me!
Roy:No I didn't you left your coat.
Ed:You ba-
*Kari and Roy are watching the recorded film, laughing their but off*
Kari:Hahaha, bye!

ahahahaha! That was great! You have to put up more chapters.

LOL! I'm usually a YGO fanwriter too, I just got into this fandom like a week ago. One thing, Roy's hair is black, not blue. And consider using handsome to describe him rather than beautiful, other than that, it wasn't entirely TOO ooc. Actually it was cute :3 good job. I hope you continue writing FMA and watching it!