aw! This story just made me smile! Great job!! I really liked it!!

This is absolutely stunning - sexy and etheral and gorgeous. Well done indeed - the lines, 'And the night... Shattered' and 'Once, I had wings' are poetic and gorgeous and the little reference to the 'Turkish harem boys' was nice too - well, well done

Very nice. I liked the ending.

GREAT ending.

Good thinking
angel gabriel

lol

Aw! I LOVED the ending! Very good piece of writing.

AWSOME! hahahaha keep up the good work!