well i feel bad that this anon person was bothering i know how you feel about it but you didn't have to change it you could have put it on adultfanfiction(dot)net that website they don't really have much complaints and your free put anything you please up there no matter how many lemon its really good website if you ever decide to write another story with lemons uh sorry chatting to much
BTW
i really like the first chapter so far it really good i look forward to reading the rest

This story is absolutely beautiful!

Regardless of what 'Anon' says, I absolutely LOVED this. It's really worth every second of my life reading this. (:


Now here I am, like a baby, crying. (: It's very touching.


Really, it is. I spotted a mistake with the word "Sorry" in Japanese. You have spelled it as 'Gome', may I ask if the person saying that was cut of? I believed that the correct way of spelling it was 'Gomen'. Not to be mean or anything, it's just a wondering thought.


Either way, this story is really fantastic. I don't I've ever read a great fanfic like this enough to make me cry for a good hour.


By the way, I would have loved to see the original version. Whoever who had reported you must have been a stupid hater who's probably jealous (like I am a bit) of your creative writing skills. Or they might have been homophobic.

I would probably take up some more space with writing how much I truly appreciate your loving story, but I guess I shouldn't make you waste your time reading this long, long review.


& Again, anyone reading this fanfic is assured that they'r not wasting their time.

Heck, Maki Murakami should buy the rights of this fanfic from you and make a comic squeal! I bet the whole world would be touched from reading your story. (:

*sniff*

i love it!
i am just about to read the sequal!
i do hope you update that soon!

Yay! That was a completely awesome fan fiction! I was a little worried when I realized you intended to make Shuichi a girl, but fortunately it all worked out in the end. And they had a baby! Little Yuki! It was so cute that Yuki suggested that they tell the media that they got In Vitro Fertilization and that they used Shuichi’s sperm so he could still be seen as the biological parent. *Sigh* So cute! ^__^
Love it!

...Firts off, WOW! I love it! It twisted my heart and mind up like a tire swing and then let it loose! I constently found myself SCREAMING in frustration or hysteria at the computer screen. I really, really enjoyed it! I started reading it when you firts put it up...but for a long while there I had no internet connection. So when I was back online I was looking for something to read and found this again. I have been completely entertained and enthrolled for the pass few days. Well I'ma go have a look see at this "For Better or Worse". Odd, cuz I was just thinking that you should do a sort of "after math story", when I saw the word "sequil". lol. Well, keep up the good work...O! And, as a friendly recommendation from a fellow writer, double check your grammer and usage...though I have to say, I found no OVEOUS error in the Japanese. Good Work. Until next time, Lates.

--Charlie

P.s.
please dont be fooled by my signed name, I really am a woman.

Gah, sorry, ffnet ate my review X_X...basically, I wanted to say that I loved the story, very unique and nice pacing...I especially love the wonderful ending

Kya

oh so that's what happened to it I was looking for it fora while I was depressed cuase I couldn't finish reading it all thanks for submitting it and I understand about AMON they bug every body and with the same name it it's so annoying

I finally finish reading your entire story. OMG this is the first story ever to have some chapters that are 20 to 30 pages long. But I aint complaining tho.^_^. it was a blast to read this story. its so sweet and non of then are OOC. keep up creating stories because your stores are great! I love the ending part.

Wow. your story is just wow. i only reach up to chap 2 cause its so long. but i like it so far. keep up the good work.

Aww, I'm glad this fic ended happily. You gave us such a kawaii ending. Serena turned out to be pretty cool after all. ^_~ And hehe, Yuki sounds so adorable...I can just picture the little family together...

I can't wait for the sequel. ^^

Whoot! I love this story! I totally think that you are british, but I've not cheated and looked on your profile yet. But yeah, I'm off to read more.

wait.. it's me again.. i forgot.. oh my goodness! they have a baby! although i hated serena from the start, i thank her for Eiri's operation, and Yuki - the baby.. waah.. really great story.. i hope you'll have more reviews, and post a lot of fics soon! *winks*

what the - .. this fic is the best! you write well! of course, i'll continue to support your next fic.. i really love this one.. goodluck on your studies too..
gaah, i was nearly crying during chapter 21.. waah! i can't explain it.. this is just simply the nicest fic of gravitation..

Great story.