 heavennoseven 2008-09-22 . chapter 13that was great? why did you have to kill her? |
 Kayleigh 2007-02-12 . chapter 13 Can u write some more pages of piper and leo so i can read them thank u very much. |
 kira-halliwell 2007-01-15 . chapter 13This is the most beautiful and touching story i have ever read. It's true to life and it's the making of a very sucessful writer. I wish you the best for your writing in the future. If this is any indication there are bright things ahead for you. |
 Golden Child Gone Rogue 2006-11-06 . chapter 13can u please write some more of piper and leo fanfictions so i can read them thanks |
 meenyrocks 2006-05-07 . chapter 13*wails* no why why?? i thought it was going to be a happy endin?
man just ignore me it's such a good ending i'm jst all taken a back by it, wasn't expecting it. and obviously sad, but it's interesting. and it works. good luck with your publishing thing! you better tell us if you make it! |
 PiperandLeoFan101 2006-04-30 . chapter 13Is this the ending? It's so sad! Poor things, the only child and she's gone. I feel so bad! It's a good endingt o mix it with what the title is about! |
 nicole812us 2006-04-25 . chapter 13Thats so sad. Great story. |
 just a little wicked 2006-04-25 . chapter 13This was a beautiful story. I loved it! |
 Alyssa Warren 2006-04-25 . chapter 13oh my god, what an amazing ending! i got a bit confused and wondered why you had put god knows how ever many years in it, but the last bit about the fallen angels made it make sense. that wa so sad, but really really good. great story and great ending! keep writing!
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 xheart to thee 2006-04-24 . chapter 13Hannah you made me cry...again. You and your fics! Gr. Just kidding, I love them.
This was so sad...I loved the idea of them getting married, I had an inkling that they would have a baby...but I didn't expect her to die so young. Agh. :( I welled up, it was so moving. I love the reference to 'fallen angels'. That was good. Not much else to say...except I loved it. |
 meenyrocks 2006-04-23 . chapter 5going to finish this when its not 1am in the morn like now, promise!! looks v v kul tho |
 EternalConfusion 2006-04-23 . chapter 13Aww, that's so sad! :( Oh god...if I wasn't so high on Coke I may have cried. But it's a great ending to a great story. I loved it, seriously. It was a very satisfying ending, it fits perfectly with the rest of the story, I don't have any unanswered questions...except it mighta been nice to read the inbetween...but I don't care. It was good. Well done. :D *huggles*
'Maybe you don't understand right now, but I'm sure you will someday. I glanced at the stone again. They're everywhere. I knew it was true. They were a lost group, people who couldn't find happiness. Some can be saved.
Some can't.'
That is so true. I understand that, it kind of makes me think of how I was a while back, and makes me glad I pulled through, some how, because, I am happier now, even if I don't always show it. Yup...good title (goes with my MSN email addy), good fic, amazing ending. |
 Charlie 2006-04-23 . chapter 13 oh. my. god. i was not expecting the sad end, and at first i was like 'hey! don't do that! that's not fair, that can't happen to them!' and although obviously that's all true, it was a brilliant original ending and the words at the end 'some can be save. some can't' were incredibly powerful and i now love that quote. ok i'm rambling, all in all, so glad you at last updated and it was brilliant. just really sad. i think the epilogue style covering so many years was really effective too. ok i'll go now! lol.
take care, hope to see a new story soon x |
 Marina 2006-04-23 . chapter 13 OMG! that last chapter nearly blew me away! It was short with a lot of information to take in. It's sad that Anna died. Although I think Piper and Leo should have atleast had another kid while Anna was little. Pretty good story until the last chapter (note to the shortness and the time warp) Anyways, Bravo!! |
 Dream.Of.Rainy.Days-x 2006-04-23 . chapter 13That was just so sad, really I had tears in my eyes the whole way through and actually cried a little in the end. But it was amazing.
Awesome end to this story, which was just great the whole way through. I salute you. |