this is okay... I like Ewans character it seems to fit him, is this post Sacred Stones because I don't think Ewan would notice it was Formortiis so i guess you should continue ASAP

I think it's a good beginning. Nice way to exploit Ewan's naieveness and trade mentors from Saleh to Knoll, and I like the mentions for Eclipse and Fenrir. As I said, good beginning. Only thing that made me wonder is how he knows what Fomortiis looks like.