THIS IS A GREAT STORY! I LOVE IT SO MUCH! keep writing!!:D

WOW that is so sad :( ut eciting at the same time ! cant wait for more !

Love it!
I read it all through my myth class.
A much better use of my time.
So thanks for giving me something good to read,
so i can actually stay awake during this class!
Please up date soon!
~Raquella

This is cute update soon!

Yay! A new chapter! I was almost, almost certain that you had given up on it! I'm extremly happy you pulled through :) and thanks for mentioning me! I've never been mentioned before! (laugh)

Aw, how sweet. I really adored this chapter! Thanks for writing and posting it. I'll be looking forward to your next update!

Amazing, as always!

I liked this one very much. Especially the line about Kyo having a "ticking clock over his head". That was deep.

Keep up the good work!

Interesting. A story that uses the anime ending with manga references. Cool.

Love it!

Hey, why don't you update?

write more, please. I haven't reviewed the 1st chapter, srry. I just don't want it to be a gay turnout, that's all ... and I loved your smiley, BTW. :o) is a nice smile. I bet you have a nice smile.

I liked this story because it captures the moment and puts it in the author's hands, if you know what I mean. It would please me if you wrote more, sir/madam.

As you have the choice not to please me, I present my offer:

You, Chrikaru, write more chapters. I shall review all of them, 1-5 times, or if you wish, even more. They will hopefully come out a little faster, each one.

That is my offer. When and/or if the next chapter comes out, I will review it. More than once if it pleases you.

I do truly hope to read more of your writing in the next chapter, Chrikaru-dono.

-ArisaWithALeadPipe-

You can call me Arisa-san if you wish. Your writing is my pleasure, if not yours as well, and your other readers.

Of course, if you prefer English anime and/or manga, you can call me Arisa, notice without the -san.

-dono is another word for 'milord' or such. -sama is another suffix for milord.

Please write more, Chrikaru-dono.

Also, Arisa-san in English would be Miss Arisa, which I would rather you wouldn't call me. So, please -dono, call me Arisa or Arisa-san.

Your writing, again, is my pleasure.

Delightfully yours,

~ArisaWithALeadPipe~

Luver of ur stories, luver of writing.

Luver of keep-going, luver of luvers.

yes yes yes please finish

it was really good. kyo and tooru are so good together, so much better than tooru and yuki...

Did you give up on this story? cause it seems really good, and I think you should continue. anyway, thanks for the great read

Great first chapter, I like the dream bit at the beginning and the whole headbutt thing was funny and the tissue paper how embarassing but it was sweet at the same time, also the dream just goes to show not only the guys think of those things, lol!
see ya
Holly