 ArisaWithALeadPipe 2009-08-15 . chapter 2 write more, please. I haven't reviewed the 1st chapter, srry. I just don't want it to be a gay turnout, that's all ... and I loved your smiley, BTW. :o) is a nice smile. I bet you have a nice smile.
I liked this story because it captures the moment and puts it in the author's hands, if you know what I mean. It would please me if you wrote more, sir/madam.
As you have the choice not to please me, I present my offer:
You, Chrikaru, write more chapters. I shall review all of them, 1-5 times, or if you wish, even more. They will hopefully come out a little faster, each one.
That is my offer. When and/or if the next chapter comes out, I will review it. More than once if it pleases you.
I do truly hope to read more of your writing in the next chapter, Chrikaru-dono.
-ArisaWithALeadPipe-
You can call me Arisa-san if you wish. Your writing is my pleasure, if not yours as well, and your other readers.
Of course, if you prefer English anime and/or manga, you can call me Arisa, notice without the -san.
-dono is another word for 'milord' or such. -sama is another suffix for milord.
Please write more, Chrikaru-dono.
Also, Arisa-san in English would be Miss Arisa, which I would rather you wouldn't call me. So, please -dono, call me Arisa or Arisa-san.
Your writing, again, is my pleasure.
Delightfully yours,
~ArisaWithALeadPipe~ |
 TheSoulmater 2005-06-30 . chapter 1Great first chapter, I like the dream bit at the beginning and the whole headbutt thing was funny and the tissue paper how embarassing but it was sweet at the same time, also the dream just goes to show not only the guys think of those things, lol!
see ya
Holly |