hey daemon new thet ah've got meself a nom de plume, hows aboot ye gimme a hit back so's we can finish thing wee bit o' fiction aye?

Well, this is a very interesting story. I wonder what will happen next. It seems a lot as happened, and Kasumi is now in the middle of it all.

Ranma has changed, for the better it would seem. He is still doing right for innocent people, and also retaining his honor. Good man!

I wonder what will happen when Nabiki comes back? Kasumi is sure to give her a tongue-lashing, and also make sure that the woman and her baby are not to be harmed by her family.

I would like to see more soon. Keep it up!

Great story thusfar, I hope you continue it and that it becomes the 'epic' story in your mind ^_^

So far, it has a sense of urgency, but doesn't feel rushed at all. I hope you explain just HOW Ranma started working for the Yakuza, because the OLD Ranma would never stand by while Woman are being used.

I love stories that are alot more serious while still keeping a certain 'pang' that Ranma 1/2 has, and I think you are doing a good job at that. Can't wait to read more^^

Good start, I hope that you continue on this one. The flow is pretty good so far, and it is an interesting idea.

GREAT START.

This looks like a dark story indeed: Nabiki trying to kill Ranma, Kasumi by herself, Ranma working in a sex house for the Yakuza, and Kiyone from Tenchi in the police force, all looks to be coming together. I'm looking forward to seeing how this story, as well as your others continue on.

Well done, looking forward to what you come up with.

Innortal

Wow that was moving. Keep up the good work I hope to see more of this in the future. Until then.