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Reviews For: Remove the Barrier

twighlightangel61090
2006-01-27
ch 2,
abusehey, this is pretty good but its a little confusing. there needs to be a little more explaination and some more fluff because the story keeps jumping around and really makes little sense right now. But the plot line is very good, so i cant wait to read more.
marieney.pervis
2005-09-05
ch 2,
abuseplease update soon! The part with the little karate was hilarious!
apocalypse09
2005-07-22
ch 1,
abuseum, k, the avril was kinda random.
Little TinkerBell Girl
2005-07-22
ch 2,
abuseplease update soon
idonrlycarenemore
2005-07-19
ch 2,
abuseheyhey, i no im being kinda, weird reviewing my own story, but i wud love it if yall'd review, please, and much love to Mrs. Nikki Slater for reviewing, and cont pls!P.S, give me constructive critisism, not just OMG! Nice story! take the time 2 review! Thnxs 4 listening, I really love yall! Ackee and saltfish-Anya
Querida1607
2005-07-18
ch 2,
abusewhy didnt suze push cee out of the way? oh well, maybe there will be some fluff with jesse...update soon please
AshlalaSparxx
2005-06-30
ch 1,
abuseWhy is Paul ALWAYS seen as evil?

He's simply misunderstood!

But I definitely wanna see what happens now that he's in her room, continue!
Querida1607
2005-06-29
ch 1,
abusethat was so great, i love it please update soon please
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