| Reviews for Remove the Barrier |
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twighlightangel61090 1/27/06 . chapter 2hey, this is pretty good but its a little confusing. there needs to be a little more explaination and some more fluff because the story keeps jumping around and really makes little sense right now. But the plot line is very good, so i cant wait to read more. |
marieney.pervis 9/5/05 . chapter 2please update soon! The part with the little karate was hilarious! |
apocalypse09 7/22/05 . chapter 1um, k, the avril was kinda random. |
Little TinkerBell Girl 7/22/05 . chapter 2please update soon |
idonrlycarenemore 7/19/05 . chapter 2heyhey, i no im being kinda, weird reviewing my own story, but i wud love it if yall'd review, please, and much love to Mrs. Nikki Slater for reviewing, and cont pls!P.S, give me constructive critisism, not just OMG! Nice story! take the time 2 review! Thnxs 4 listening, I really love yall! Ackee and saltfish-Anya |
Querida1605 7/18/05 . chapter 2why didnt suze push cee out of the way? oh well, maybe there will be some fluff with jesse...update soon please |
AshlalaSparxx 6/30/05 . chapter 1Why is Paul ALWAYS seen as evil? He's simply misunderstood! But I definitely wanna see what happens now that he's in her room, continue! |
Querida1605 6/29/05 . chapter 1that was so great, i love it please update soon please |