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| twighlightangel61090 2006-01-27 ch 2, | abusehey, this is pretty good but its a little confusing. there needs to be a little more explaination and some more fluff because the story keeps jumping around and really makes little sense right now. But the plot line is very good, so i cant wait to read more. |
| marieney.pervis 2005-09-05 ch 2, | abuseplease update soon! The part with the little karate was hilarious! |
| apocalypse09 2005-07-22 ch 1, | abuseum, k, the avril was kinda random. |
| Little TinkerBell Girl 2005-07-22 ch 2, | abuseplease update soon |
| idonrlycarenemore 2005-07-19 ch 2, | abuseheyhey, i no im being kinda, weird reviewing my own story, but i wud love it if yall'd review, please, and much love to Mrs. Nikki Slater for reviewing, and cont pls!P.S, give me constructive critisism, not just OMG! Nice story! take the time 2 review! Thnxs 4 listening, I really love yall! Ackee and saltfish-Anya |
| Querida1607 2005-07-18 ch 2, | abusewhy didnt suze push cee out of the way? oh well, maybe there will be some fluff with jesse...update soon please |
| AshlalaSparxx 2005-06-30 ch 1, | abuseWhy is Paul ALWAYS seen as evil? He's simply misunderstood! But I definitely wanna see what happens now that he's in her room, continue! |
| Querida1607 2005-06-29 ch 1, | abusethat was so great, i love it please update soon please |